I want to say this is a very funny way to change the ending and I would like if this was the real ending.
I like naruhina and sasusaku but those don't feel right to me.
Anyway great good work and don't bother with the hard comments the ones I saw here are probably writen by people who can't accep that there are peole that didn't like the ending or others that are just homophobic

FUCKING DELUSIONAL YAOI FANGIRL! IF YOU HAD YOUR WAY THEN HINATA & SAKURA WOULD'VE DIED IN THE END & SASUKE & NARUTO WOULD'VE BEEN MAKING LOVE ONTHEIR GRAVES! YOU'RE & OTHERS LIKE YOU ARE PATHETIC.

ALSO I'M NOT A HOMOPHOBE! I HAVE A GAY AUNT WHO GOT MARRIED RECENTLY (I have known her partner since elementary school) & THE JOY & LOVE I HAVE FOR THEM IS 100% MORE REAL & GENUINE THEN YOU COULD HAVE EVER HAD IF YOUR OTP BECAME CANNON!

You are a disgusting little fag. If you don't like the manga why don't you get yourself some yaoi hentai to get off to. Or better yet, throw yourself in front of a train. Then the whole world would be better off. Fucking loser.

This was beautiful and honestly I feel like this has to be one of the few alternate endings I've seen that could've been canon easily. 8D Thank you for writing this!

Oh-oh my frickin lumps. THE FEELS MAN. They sting me with so much emotion. I'm glad you wrote this.

It would have been wonderful if chapter 700 was just a dream. I'd like to forget it but there are parts that I liked, such as Sarada (Salad). But NaruSasu/SasuNaru is my OTP!

thanks for sharing ur version of naruto s ending...it s 1000times better than Kishimoto s nonsense..i enjoyed it a up the good work.

If only it were "all a dream," right? Alas. I'd take the cliche "it's all a dream" asspull over the asspull that was 700 any day.

Loved it ,better than canon

Heyo! Thank you for this story it made me happy because I was very very very down about chapter 700, I love that they are naming him itachi XP good job, did anyone notice that choujis kid looks like a over sized gerbil?

Wow I am not one for NaruSasu normally but this was so well written I would've preferred this as the ending to Naruto than what we got! I mean NaruSasu who have shown to have a strong bond, the strongest in the entire manga are happily together. They are on very good terms with Sakura and Kakashi, with Sakura even bearing a child for her 2 precious boys and they still meet up as Team 7 from time to time. I feel the warmth and happiness from this fic way more than I go from the ending. Great job with this! If only ... right?

I can't see sakura doing that don't see it ever happen but the ending being a bad dream I loved I hated it two.

sorry but i'm wanna those people who actually loved the original naruto ending. the ending of the manga was i'm sorry you didn't get the ending you wanted. but at least narusasu fans aren't acting bad as narusaku fans are. i actually perfer narusasu more than narusaku. i think narusasu have more of a chance then narusaku. but to me the original manga ending was great.

I'd love to write longass reviews and such but I'm too lazy so let's just stick to...

PLS TELL ME UR ACTUALLY KISHI HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA GOD THIS IS A BETTER ENDING JFC THANK YOU

One has to wonder why no one named their kids after any of the people who died.
Thanks for rewriting that dreadful ending!