So interesting! Glorfindel just put his soldiers in his place, it was mean how they treated them

Amazing story

This was a portrayal of Legolas that I had never come across before, and I daresay I loved it! It was a really new and refreshing piece of work, and I truly loved the friendship betwee Legolas and Elrohir. Thank you for letting me in on the ride!

I had a bad cold, and this story was exactly what I needed! It's so absorbing, the characters are so well-done, and the angst and non-angst are so perfectly balanced, that it made me forget my sickness. Thank you SO much for this!

I absolutely love your take on the different tribes of elves and the variety of personalities you've given the characters, often people write them as boring and beautiful or generic super-skilled banter-factories and don't consider how they would be shaped by the different situations in each realm 3

I am glad Legolas made friends with twins.

I wonder why Elrond was surprised that Thranduil wanted to keep in secret the identity of his sons. Mirkwood warriors despite being ambassadors weren't welcomed warmly by Noldo warriors and lords. Thranduil was aware of prejudices and no wonder he wanted to protect his son. Great chapter. Characters are full of life and so convincing. I can't wait to meet Thranduil. Thank you for sharing your amazing story.

Great chapter!

Breathtaking battle scenes! Thank you

I really love the way you presented prejudices between Noldo and Silvan. Legolas is absolutely brilliant. Thank you so much for your story.

I started to read your story and really love it. I like the brotherhood bond you portrayed between Silvan Elves. Thank you for writing and sharing your wonderful story.

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! When Elrond slapped that book down on the table, I thought it was all over for Legolas! But huzzah for a happy ending!

But that ending! Those last two lines! Elrond just foresaw the Ring and the Fellowship! Awesome, awesome!

Thank you so much for this! It's an instant favourite!

This is so wonderful! I love how Legolas is able to see past things to the root of the matter (even if he doesn't know what that root is). And there he went saying he understood how it felt to lose a mother. And Elladan being adorable and offering his friendship! And the Silvan elves being upset but loyal and it's all awesome!

I'm going to keep reading now. :)

This is such an awesome first chapter! I'm going to keep reading!

Apart from a slight overuse of dashes, a good and interesting start.