Eventually, I always come back to your story. Your narrative is exquisite. Perfect. The first arc of your story is a masterpiece.

Honestly I can’t say I love this or hate but this is the best CG I have ever read, please complete it. Subarashii

Wow

Okay Charles and Marianne were to Two fucked up individuals in the Show but... that is too much and also makes not really sence...

Well I hope the schneizel rapes Lelouch thing isnt going to be the entire Story I would have wasted a lot of time. Also I really hope that isnt one those Storys were the victim lives happy with the perpetrator after some bullshit happend, it is really annoying !

Love the way you get into Schneizel’s head. He seems like a hard character to write because of his contradictions, messed up-ness, and multiple layers but it felt right here. Hope we get to see more

I’m consistently blown away by the symbolism and literature references in your writing that blend seemlessly with the plot. Awesome twists and very very fun read

Because I’m critical of suzaku’s actions in canon, I’m probably unfairly happy when I see him suffering. Anyway I think you depict his POV very convincingly (and heartbreakingly)

Ah so much happened in this chapter, where do I even start?! I like the Marianne twist you built up to. I always felt she was a horribly selfish person in canon, and you explore her ruthlessness so in-depth here (ugh, the lengths she’s willing to put her own children through are disturbing). As I also ship suzalulu and always feel frustrated that a lot of Suzaku’s traitorous actions were a result of stupid misunderstandings, I really enjoyed the scene where he’s in the world of C. Maaaybe he’ll finally get some sense slapped into him? Poor Lulu though. She’s suffered so much already.

;;;;; So painful but so captivating. Seriously I cannot get enough of your writing! Great work

yay~ finally an update! I love your story very very much 3

I've really enjoyed reading this. I hope that Lelouch continues to hold Schneizel in contempt though. I hate how men always blame the women when the men stray, AND when the women stray. Way to be like every other man in existence, Schneizel. Also, was it too much of a burden to wear a condom? Honestly.
Lelouch definitely shouldn't let him get away with being such a hypocrite. Also, he has both Kanon and Lelouch, what else could he possibly want?
Is Lelouch incapable of getting birth control or the morning after pill (using Sayako or Geassing someone to do her bidding when she needs them)? Or, if she doesn't want children anymore, she should Geass herself to be sterile until she consciously wants a child. If that doesn't work, then she should really think about Geassing Schneizel into treating her as an equal in ALL ways, not just when it suits him.
She should also Geass Abigail into miscarrying any child that is Schneizel's. If Lelouch is too righteous to kill an unborn child, then Lelouch should Geass Abigail into leaving Pendragen and forgetting that she ever knew Schneizel. She needs to deal with that situation somehow. If I were in Lelouch's position, I'd be so angry, especially when Schneizel dismisses, trivializes, and abuses Lelouch's feelings and rights. She should get revenge somehow. I understand that Lelouch has needed to be essentially spineless up to now, but she should still stand up for herself and protect herself when necesssary. She's already given him two children, he doesn't need more. He already has two lovers, he doesn't need more. He's such a spoiled brat.
I look forward to reading the next installment! I hope that Lelouch will finally start standing up for herself.

Just kill abilgil like the rest of schniezel ex-lovers, schniezel love lelouch since young and only used those ex-lovers to fulfil his desires with lelouch eyes and looks. Schniezel, just fulfil your desire with lelouch, his lust, just do it with lelouch without rest as long as you don't go to that abilgil women(hate her).

Suzaku has no right to judge seeing as he passed her off.

Have her pregnant with Suzaku’s Child