And so the Prophecy is at last fulfilled; "The POWER he knew not"... the Grace of God on a single human being already full of Grace.
Truly poetic.

Alan 'Shepard', US Astronaut. And then you have a "shep-HERD", a shepherd who guides the flock.
Big difference.
Great story so far. Too bad you stopped. You hit on a multitude of higher truths. And whether or not you "know of Christianity", everything we need is in The Book of God's Word. I would say that, having been brought up in the Church myself that you have truly found your FAITH and not a mere belief in organized prayer as a "religion".
You should pick up this thread and git 'er done!

Awww...oh...No!

Beautifully done. Amen.

Really sad but in a odd way a beautiful ending.

That was beautiful. I'm Christian myself, and other than making Harry and Dudley too saintly - no human is like either, though they may be close - you did really well. I wish there were more stories like this.

This was really beautifully done. Religion is hard to write about but this was done really well. I enjoyed reading this. It shows what a little faith can do to change people's lives. Thank you for writing this.

The only thing I can say to this story is WOW. Will there be another one like this one? Puppy dog eyes.

Stull, Kansas?

I am not a religious person even though I have read both old and new testament as well a Koran. Even such, I must admit I will read this story again because it is greatly composed and written. Thank you.

Obviously you did not do any fucking research..

ENGLAND OR THE UNITED KINGDOM IS CHURCH OF ENGLAND NOT FUCKING CATHOLICS. ONLY ONES WHO WOULD FIT THE BILL OF BEING ROMAN CATHOLIC WOULD BE NORTHERN IRELAND, NOT BLOODY ENGLAND.

That was beautiful.

Awesome story! :)

please make a sequel

I will say this, the first chapter made me a bit uncomfortable, but I stuck through it. I'm glad I did.
Such a simple concept, beautifully executed. This one is going on my favorites list, as a reminder that we are not all devoid of creativity.