This is way better than the previous one. Dont take it as an insult because I love the first one but No Man’s Land is AMAZEBALLS! Hope you’ll update this fic dear authour!

Please update soon, i want to know what happens...

I know this is VERY late but I would just like you to know, if you ever log in on here again, that this is one of the most amazing fics I've ever read. I made an account for the sole purpose of following you/the story on the off chance that it may ever be updated (I've seen stories updated after 3 years before, so I hold out hope no matter how slim it may be). However, regardless if this story is ever completed or not, you've done something extraordinary with it and I want to thank you for putting it out into the world.

I just came across this after the original, and was able to read it all in big bits here and there in this busy week. After reaching chapter 18, I just want to express my amazed awe and love for this novel, and your incredible skills in not only writing so much, but with the most riveting quality. I never felt so moved by a fanfic (or any form of literature for that matter) in so long. I know it's been years since you've updated, and for reasons life has been inedibly behind, and I'll admit I'm very saddened that I probably will never see the end of it. I dont even know if your reading this, but I just want to let you know, if you come across this, that you should never in any circumstances feel . Writers are humans too, and humans have lives they get sucked into. You're an absolute inspiring writer and I hope you know that. Again, if you came across this one day, I want to say thank you for writing this wonderful story (and reading this long-ass comment

I finally got the time to return to reading this and it didn’t disappoint. Seeing since it’s been over a year since your last update I can imagine you’ve been very busy in your life since you started writing this. Nevertheless thank you for bringing such a gem of a story into the small redorbshipping community. This story will always be a treasure.
If you do find the time to update and complete this story I’ll be looking forward to seeing it.
All the best IslandWolf xx
-Hybrid

Amazing story so far I love it. As always looking forward to more.

Hi! Can I just say that your story has brightened my life so much? This is the best Maxie/May fanfiction I've come across so far and I wish there was more content for this pairing. Bless you for writing this story. I, as well as the rest of your readers appreciate you so much for gracing us with this story. I do have to ask though, when will you finish? Are you going to finish? It's understandable if you have stuff going on, but it'd be wonderful if you could tell us when the next few chapters might come out. Thank you so much! Good work!

I don't know if you are still working on this Fic, but please update! I could not stop reading this, and it's one of the best fanfictions I have read

I just want to let you know - 1: this story is incredibly well written and thank you for that. It's often hard to come by well-written Maxie/May fanfiction and 2: I hope your life is going a bit smoother now. I have been through those moments where you just need to dedicate more time for yourself and put other tasks on the back burner.

But no matter what, whenever you are ready to update again, I'll be happily waiting! Best of luck!

OMG THIS STORY IS SOOOOO AMAZING
I read the original a long while back, so when I found this is I thought the original would be better. I THOUGHT WRONG. The plot is epic and I love the whole Absol lore and May having a child and your awesome writing style! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

Wow so good

Oh boy an update! And a really good one!
I am looking forward to the next one!

I can't wait for more! I hope you update soon cuz I am absolutely in love with this fic.

Please update I love this story sooooooo much

THIS WAS A HELLA CHAPTER! B) *regrets not reading it sooner, hasnt been into redorbshipping in a while im so sorry for not reviewing like i always did lately jeez* im hoping this gets continued! part of what initially put me off was the pregnancy thing, ive never liked it when heroines have kids, but i know youre a brilliant writer and im holding onto my faith that the baby wont be written as more important than may ;; the keystone part was pulled off so well! the whole story is a lot more sophisticated than what a lot of other pokemon stories like to delve into, im really really REALLY intrigued by the groudon/kyogre/rayquaza lore bits mentioned and im so pumped to see where it goes. B( im gonna fight maxie for trying to stop may's dreams of kicking ass tho. aaaaND ITS BEEN A WHILE SINCE IVE SAID THIS BUT ITS MY CATCHPHRASE FOR MY REVIEWS ON THIS FIC: GOD BLESS U GOD BLESS U !