Beautiful! Thank you! :)

Finally, the bitch apologizes. And they made up!

The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Damien Rice's "Greatest Bastard", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.

catspats31
Member of Eliminator

oh so lovely!

I blame you for this song being on repeat for the last 24 hours. Beautiful fic and even better song.

Beautiful. And finally someone who agreed with me about Lisa, even though not knowingly. Thanks. :-)

Not bad

Really just beautifully moving. Thank you.

This is a awesome story. Thank you!

Oh, my goodness. Your stories about Holly and Gail are so fresh and interesting. I love them. Please keep writing about these two lovely ladies between the S5 & S6 hiatus and through S6 :)

If only. Golly. Nice writing