Reviews for Alone
Jimbotron96 chapter 1 . 12/23/2018
Damn it Snow! Poor Emma.
She doesn't deserve this.
Thank god Regina called Snow out on her stupidity.

Great insight on Emma's feelings.
Galvatron chapter 1 . 1/13/2016
Please write a sequel.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
Beautifully written and so sad!
brave1 chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
What I love about Emma is that when her powers started to peak, she didn't immediately become a Mary-Sue - instead it caused her to feel alone all again in spite of the people she has grown to love and care for. You honestly wonder just how she can be so committed to ensuring that everyone gets a happy ending when she's been through so much.
And I think this fic captures that excellently.

One question though: Just how common [was] magic in the Enchanted Forest? Snow's reaction suggests that either
a) Magic was rare, and people honestly didn't know what to do when it showed up (esp if your own child turned out to be magic-sensitive)
b) Magic was typically linked with villainy i.e, very few people used it for good
or
c) Magic does have an inherently evil nature behind it (I've heard Lana Parilla liken Regina to an addict in terms of how she uses magic)
Baccan chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Thank you for sharing, really something. :)
tvmatchmaker795 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
I noticed that you didnt put down it as finished... :) Please, please, please continue this! I think this is what the show really should be exploring instead of the romance, haha although that is my opinion. I really enjoy your writing style and the way you have conveyed Emma's thoughts throughout season 4. Please write on!
Invisible Observer 3 chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
More please. I love the story so far and thank you for focusing on Snow White making her feel alone and not Snow White and David (to me David's face reflected pain from being hit more than it did fear so I think Snow should have said I messed up and not we). I can't wait to see your interpretation on how this is fixed since right now I see David, Killian, and Henry (maybe Elsa) actively going out to fix this when Snow is the one that needs to. I can't wait for more. Enjoy.
Bad Ass Female Fighter chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Poor Emma.
ahsinam33 chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
This story is just perfect. You really managed to get into Emma's head and none of what you wrote seemed unrealistic. Thank you for writing this because Snow's behavior really did need to be addressed.
Keep up the good work!
Sammmc chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
I'm so glad someone wrote this out! I was watching the episode thinking how it should be written and this is exactly it! Amazing job
A-Foster-Fairytale-World chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
I love this story!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Please update new chapters I'm glad someone finally included the snow queen in the characters filter I want more Emma and snow queen stories and chapters as I totally am a snowqueen/Emma shipper
Revengest chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Great start!
MoonlightNymph chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Poor, Poor Emma. My heart hurts everytime I watch 4x7. I hope you continue.
emmacharming2 chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Poor Emma. Can you do a chapter showing Snow's point of view next?
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