Loved it

Very Nice!

i love this story! :) its really really great! thanks for posting!
anne

I am not Russian, but I speak this beautiful language. And although the translation is really not accurate, I think it's sweet how you did your best (you even used Russian alphabet). These are my suggestions:
the pleasure is mine - they don't really say that, I think it would be better to leave it at "приятно познакомиться" (it's a pleasure to meet you)
моя возлюбленная - my love (lover in Russian means more physical aspect of the relationship, my translation focuses on emotional/feeling part:)
my angel - мой ангел (I think this one is accurate)
ненаглядная - female declension

Beautiful!

I love it! :D

This was a really sweet story ! thanks