Great story. Very in character and a realistic description of Lilly's feelings and thought progressions. There is always hope.

hi
very very nice!
Its great to take Lils view through your text.
Well done.

I love it!

Very good internal dialogue. I liked the way she talked and talked back to herself in the beginning. The ending was well done, especially with Lily realizing that her sister needs more help than Lilly can give her alone.