OH MY GOSH THIS IS SO CUTE IM CRYING THE LAST SENTENCE HAD ME SMILING SO MUCH ACTUALLY I WAS SMILING THE WHOLE TIME I WAS READING THIS. Kotoumi in america seems so romantic with their lil date too :')

This was so delightfully cute! I really enjoyed the dialogue in this story. Well, in Umi's case, it's more like having a lot of fun watching her try to string together a coherent sentence. I think my favorite thing has to be Kotori totally picking up near the end that Umi was checking her out. Thank you for the great read (:

This is pretty good! You depict Umi's thoughts and her interactions with Kotori without making it too fluffy. I especially like the description of her still inadequate social skills, even though she's clearly making an effort to change that. Good work! Hope to read more from you!

SO CUTE. Even cuter because I actually know these characters. More or less. Anyways, Umi is the most adorably awkward lesbian ever. "Because. You... dress nice?" Wow, you're so good at the complimenting thing there. Also yes to all the coffee dates. Because coffee.

Loved this KotoUmi! It's well-written and it gave me a big smile on my face while reading it. Kotori sure knows how to get her way with the Umi XD

Thanks for the good read, nya! Great job! :3

Ohoho...*wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge* ;3

So good. I wasn't sure how you'd wrap this up because it's a one shot and they had only just met. However, you did it so nicely! As a stand alone, its great. I'd love to read more works from you. Time to check your profile!

I like your story
I hope you write more KotoUmi :)