I remember reading this on LJ when it was first posted. I just love this. It's a little dark, but I love that the goodness in Severus's heart shown through. He knew that what was happening was wrong and that Lily didn't deserve to go through that. The way he stands up to Salazar is very brave of him, and it shows that his will is so powerful. Wonderful one-shot, hun! Xx

it was good.

Hmmm.

Oooh, a dark and creepy tale indeed! But it was still quite hot. :) I do love that Severus' ever-present control of his mind and emotions saved the day there at the end. Your Salazar was terrifying and yet intriguing, which I imagine is what made him so powerful in his day. Great story!

Thanks a lot for this intriguing one shot! It is good that Severus realized his mistake with this 'dark' sort of sexual domination at the end of his 'experience'... He wanted to feel and make love to Lily because he has deeper feelings for her, but he did not want not to dominate her, or even use an erotic dark magic spell. It is an interesting inner fight with himself and the outcome shows that he is a good person. Nonenthless is was hot and great written as always :)! And I liked the different settings and insights into Severus's personality as a teenager! Thanks so much again :)!

Despite that Snape is a Slytherin, deep down he does have a moral center and limits to how far it goes, even in BDSM. What he saw in his future self, he's canny enough to realize he doesn't have to BE that person.
Aside from that, now I know how he was able to pleasure Hermione thanks to a ghost, and claim her completely. ;-)
So, in a way, in an AU, he got his happily ever after.

BTW, I dunno how you do it, but I love how you were able to take the prompts and create/twist it in a way that was even better. Bravo!

Wow, that was...different.
I really have trouble to describe my feelings about this... it was hot, a bit funny, and Severus suffered from his loneliness and love for Lily and gave himself over to Salazar himself..I would never have expected that despite the title.
Brilliantly written as always and I can see your progress you are doing in your writing...the turnarounds get unexpected and your choice of words is just awesome.