Nice story

very good story. I like how coco and Jaune are like Peter Parker and Mary Jane. coco has that same kinda confident appeal that Mary Jane has. the way coco calls him champ and honey reminds me of when MJ calls Peter tiger. pretty cool. I didn't really like the side track story with velvet. I wished you would've kept the focus on the main characters of the stories, then again it's your story and you had your reasons for fleshing it out like that

still no update

I WANT AN UPDATE!

Lovin' the war between Coco and Pyrrha. As a side note, would it be possible for you to also write some back story on why Cardin hates faunus? I figure he'd mention it sometime, since he now knows that Dove likes Velvet

Got utterly real in here. Eagerly waiting for whenever there might be an update. I'm really interested in the Dove and Velvet Arc. Every interaction has been a joy to read. Best wishes!

Do more

this is good make more

Coco got the coffee

WOW. Even though it's been over a year since this baby got an update; I really, really wish you'd update soon! This was really fun to read - especially the Omakes XD

well since you asked, i'd like to see a scene with all of team NDGO around jaune. maybe after thier loss in the tourney he encourages them and it starts there. you seem to have a good grasp on coco from the few scenes i've seen her in. five stars!

JAUNE X FUCKING COCO FOR LIFE!

FOR FUCKS SAKE TEAM RWBY STOP ROOTING FOR PYRRHA

I FUCKING SWEAR TEAM RWBY IF YOU'RE ROOTING FOR PYRHHA YOUR DEAD

Great story so far! I hope thing shave turned out better for you! I can't wait to see we're this goes!