Ohhhh nooooo... it’s THOSE slavers? This is going to get very painful very quickly, isn’t it?

I LOVE the way Thane found her. And her reaction was just perfect! Loving this!

OMG, Mouse made a VI of Thane? XD That’s adorable!

I’m really enjoying seeing how Thane is already, even if unintentionally, shaping who Kasumi will eventually become. This is shaping up to be a fun story. :)

Well, I am officially intrigued. :) I love your premise so far, and I’m looking forward to seeing where you take this.

I created an account only to be able to comment on your story. I love it! Great job! I can't wait for more.

Some spelling errors here and there, but WOAH! If I didn't know any better, I would've thought this was official backstory.

Please continue

Gosh, I love this so much already. Can't wait for the next update! Your doing such a great job.

I feel like she's a very unfortunate soul. She keeps trying and find people to love and who loves her back and they they're ripped out of her life. It's very sad.

This transition is really important, and I like how you played it out. I'm excited to see if Keiji finds out about Thane and how he reacts to it, but if that doesn't happen, I still know you come up with something amazing.

As always, definitely looking forward to the next one!

How did I miss out on the update?! So exciting, this chapter was a lot longer too, love it! Carrin is so mature for her age but her insecurity and nervousness comes through sometimes and you realize she's just a little girl. Can't wait to see how she reacts to going back to Omega.

I really am enjoying this story so far. It's really interesting the way you have the timeline, and I'm truly liking it so far.

I'm excited for the adventures and events to come!

MAKE MORE 3

The story is definitely getting more colourful. Still feels like it's just about to take off and like something big is going to happen. I can't wait! Awesome update, keep it coming!