I adore this story so much. I know that you haven't been writing much (or any) FT at all lately, and of course I completely support that, this is your art and you can choose to have it take whatever form you want :) Just mentioning that I'm a big fan of your Fairy Tail fics, and of your absolutely stunning writing and characterization (seriously there are some GORGEOUS lines in here) in hopes that you ever feel like revisiting this old fandom and pairing :) Love and appreciate your work so much, thanks for everything you do!

Wow wow wow wow wow

looool I loved it! Gray is so husband material here... feeeeels

Grin,

Fortunately, it's not 02:30 when I was reading this. I suppose I should stick around a little and read more of your works. Thank you for writing this.

gray surge and his fucking cups of tea, i swear to god.

so this was the exact type of fic that i read, re-read, squeal over, and proceed to plan out a doujinshi for. this is /begging/ to be drawn, someone needs to make you a manga. i'm dying. no, really, i think i am.

okay no but, okay, wait, just /wait/ a second so we can appreciate the intensely perfect scene that was juvia purposefully turning gray on as she gets off his lap. i could absolutely imagine that groan. that was the defining scene of this fic for me, it just screams the adorable, hilarious, slightly alarming sexual tension edo!gruvia is drowning in.

'am i /sober/ enough for you now' — jfc, edo!juvia, salt queen. like, just the image you painted there of her pissed off face and a quirked brow and eyes that almost—but /just/ failing—to mask her amusement.

gray's face when she said 'very', god, i would pay money to see that drawn.
or i'll actually fucking /learn to draw his ridiculous fucking hair/ just so i can draw it for myself.

juvia got legs that go on for days and she /knows that/, god, i'm in love.

gray cursing himself out for not taking the chance dangling in front of him
(which i mean jfc nO GRAY YOU MADE THE RIGHT CHOICE, BBY IT'S OK GET YOUR LIBIDO UNDER CONTROL ALRIGHT YOU ARE A GOOD MAN, AN UPRIGHT CITIZEN, THERE ISN'T A SINGLE SCOUNDREL BONE IN YOUR BODY)

'you're saying... /no/?" god i can imagine it I CAN LITERALLY SEE THIS PANEL IN MY HEAD

honestly. i swear. i really might just end up drawing this one day. god only knows.

your plotbunnies are little pieces of gold descended from mount olympus yon high, my friend.

Gosh, Gray was so cute in this story! And he was so nice and gentlemanly! I want a Gray Surge, damn!
And ooh, someone's gonna get some! *wink, wink* (I can't believe I wrote that)
Also, way to go, Juvia, you go get your man! :D

This is a brilliant one shot! Great job, I love it. You write the BEST edo Gruvia fics! Thanks!

but like gray surge making edo juvs moan
like you go dude
pumping pom poms
YOU GET HER GRAY SURGE

i like that a lot "he returned her kisses with contained euphoria
1. i like the word euphoria but 2. contained is so interesting

BRUH
TENTATIVE FINGERS RUNNING UP THEARCH OF HER BACK

AWW THIS BABY
IS AMOST AT HTE VERGE OF TEARS
DONT HURT HIM

LOL
"i'm thirsty"
damn straight juvs
but not for the tea

"greatest makeout session of his life"
gray surge too pure for htis world

OH MY GO D
wait
"a part of him - a very tiny, assuming part"
i'm so sorry i thought of his AHEM
i was about to be like bro tiny?
HAHAHA i get it its his conscience

"his mind wouldn't stop sending images of what could have been"
-wipes tear- that's just a beautiful sentence

LOL people who cockblocked themselves deserved keys to teh city
hes sop roud of himself i can't stop grinning

ARE YOU MAD AT ME
thats so cute

AWWW
SHE GON GET IT
SHE WENT FOR IT AGAIN
GOOD FOR YOU MAN

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in conclusion
i liked this a lot B) very nice man very nice B)) SUPER cute ending! Really nicely written! :D

that was sooo cute...i've no idea why i find it soo cute i just do

GAAAHH THIS SO ADORABLE AFJHJGHERGHG

I thought it was very realistic of how Gray sort of indulged that HOT makeout session with her but at the same time, stopped it when things got too far. And omfg the way she pounced on him (or approached him) was so perf and sexy that I can't even- And Gray's so precious, like even though he was being all greedy with Juvia's kisses he was still such a sweetheart and a gentleman over it. And the ending was so adorable...it's exactly the kind of fluffy ending I enjoy. Bless your cotton socks, this is beautiful, I love it! And seriously, if you have anything new, TELL ME, cause I hardly check the edo gruvia tags cause no one seems to be updating and I am legit excited to see what you come up with next :D

this is great ! :D please make more ! I enjoyed all of your stories :3

I think this came out fairly well, actually. I'm glad that he stopped things from going too far when he thought Juvia was just doing it because she was drunk, although she wasn't (glad). ;) I get the impression that she wasn't really drunk enough to not know what she was doing, though. Just drunk enough to use it as an excuse (to herself or others) for what she was doing. At least until Gray ruined her excuse by insisting on not going too far while she was drunk. ;)

And I'd be willing to beta your stories as far as spelling and grammar goes.

I loved it! I think it was cute... i really think edo Juvia has feelings for edo Gray. Is always a pleasure to read your fanfics

Nudge will be you beta. I set up my profile now and I didnt see any mistakes but why did you list Earthland-Gruvia along with Edo-Gruvia?

Omg I love it *0*
Ahhhh I'm so excited for the next one shoot