I am on chapter 5 right now so I have a question.
Why is Naruto an A-rank in the Bingo Book? It would make sense if he was an A-Rank for beating Zabuza but bandits? They aren't any big threat so why does he get an A rank?
Hell, I think that the Demon Brothers, Meizu and Gozu can defeat 50 bandits if they play it safe but they are only C rank.

Cool.

just so you know Shukaku is a Tanuki but at least you got is somewhat right

That was totally out of left field

damnit. i hoped to read more chapter. the story is good.

Wow this story is just trash with how you write and out the sentences together. There's so much mistakes and shit too.

Wow should had listen to the other reviewers who said the songs were annoying. I agree it was annoying fuck, like did you really think a song is gonna work in a story, how dumb are you if you thought that will work.

Please don't ever do that song stuff again. I get what you were trying but it killing the story flow and pacing. It works in movies and tv shows but NEVER in books. You can add the song name and bits and pieces at parts but that was way too much. Books and stories get the affects in the ways the moment is told. Movies and tv shows can not do that so that why they use music.

Great story please continue it soon

this story in my opinion is so fucking awesome and was the greatest naruto fanfiction i have ever read i especially love the part in the last chapter when naruto roast's jaraiya's punk ass ... so keep writing more of these kick ass fanfiction

why are you makeing naruto evil wtf

people putting lyrics into their fics to give it better imaginative "power" and/or artificially lengthen it should be stoned several times,then pushed through a grinder,then atomised. god i hope you stopped writing fics.

So he is wut 5'3 considering 4'12 is 5' and he is 4'15

Cool, please keep writing.

PotC reference hahahahha JUST KISS hahahahahahh