wow! great story! i love your work!

that was hilarious lmao I believe he was cursed for throwing away that sandwich fro the previous chapter, wish you had it now don't you Harry loool

Great first actual chapter!

You are a real bastard for writing this piece of shit and u must have enjoyed writing such shit. It was one thing when harry did such thing to escape dusley when he did not know what he was getting but it was disgusting that u make him do it again when he knows who he is in wizarding world. In the name of being strong this is one of worst piece of shit I have ever read. As if harry potter can't be strong with magic that he has to suck dick and fucked by people to be strong. How can u write such piece of shit u must be a real bastard, you will rot in hell you moron

7/10 A good DarkHarry fic. I personally enjoy edgy dreary fics like this, however I'm not good with sad stuff so this is a pretty nice one.

Both addictive and disturbing. I guess that means that I can’t wait to see what happens at Hogwarts, but am afraid for certain characters at the same time.

Dark is one thing. This is pretty much pitch black.

This story is badass! Thank you for digging deep to write it!

Great story, looking forward to reading next installment! Thanks for sharing!

Ah, so far I'm enjoying this quite a lot- fancy that! I think that the prolugue just put me off a bit, (how old was he there? At first he seemed around 15, but that was before I'd read the coming chapters. I guess I'll find out soon enough ) since Harry seemed a bit like a cold blooded killer. I have to say, I'm immensely pleased that Harry actually feels things. My pleasure is heightened upon seeing Harrys interactions and building of a family with your OCs. I'm glad that they're OCs, for it would be quite... Odd, if a known character such as Lucuis Malfoy had dealings in muggle London.

I do have a few questions, though. Theyre mostly here for the sake of written contemplation more than anything, but feel free to answer any of my questions that will not be answered or explained in the coming chapters. The alias in the name bar is the name of the account, I'm just too lazy to log in lol.

Anywho: you mentioned Severus Snape in an earlier chapter regarding the memory enhancement and such- does this mean that it only happened to Severus and Harry and no one else, even with the presumable plethora of abused children? Or are they the only people who have been documented?

Forgive me if I'm nitpicking - I've been told I have a problem with asking unnecessary questions. But it's 4 am and I've had no coffee, so I feel as though I'm inclined slightly to be so nonsensical. Plus, my intrest was piqued by Severus's mentioning- I read a lot of Severitus.

Moving on- I know that you place a lot of emphasis on Harrys eyes and the such, but doesn't his young age have more of an impact? Then again, I'm not incredibly educated on the hierarchy of the crime scene, but surely he would sound pompous or comical to some- speaking with such intricate vocabulary with a squeaky, eight year old voice. Does his voice shape with his magic or something of the sort?

Idk it's just really funny to imagine Harry as this imposing, scrawny (isnt that an oxymoron?) figure, with these weapons and wicked green eyes, and then speaking with perfectly formed words in this squeaky eight year old arse voice, in all its pre pubescent glory. Also, its interesting as to how Connor sees Harry, considering I'm quite sure that they're the same age.

Shouldn't Harry feel some things towards what is essentially his son? Shouldn't he ponder fatherhood more? I'm not sure, and this is probably a stupid question but- 4am. Everything is more viable at 4am. Idk it just seems, the fatherhood, like a discerning cum weird concept for me.

Please tell me if I'm being disrespectful towards you or your writing. I do have a tedious habit of insulting people, especially since I cant apologise like this out loud, since it so often ends up looking insincere or unecessary. I really am enjoying this work so far, since I enjoy fanfics where Harry is more... Slytherin in his actions, and one's where he lives in the street.
Thanks for listening to my own Inessecent ramblings, have a nice day/night! Uwu~

I'm not sure how much of this I'll read, since I clicked only to skim through, but this seems really interesting, if not obviously super sad. I doubt I'll be able to read all of it, since I'm pants at dealing with characters who are 'evil' or at the most have a scoped moral compass or just mindless killers.
It makes me so incredibly sad that Harry had t at that age, let alone get raped and smoke joints! I hope he isn't an addict TT
Also pedos are absolutely despicable humans and I hope that the pimps get their comupance,
Ta

Fantastic and very well-written opener. Definitely looking forward to here it goes from her. Thanks for a Great Read!

Hi,

What a fantastic story concept! You came up with a large cast of OCs. If I'd known that there would be so many, I'd have made notes along the way.

At this point, I find myself with a question/thought or two

Harry has this crime empire set up and is (apparently) making serious money. That said, 1) why would he give it up to go to Hogwarts and be forced into the role of an eleven year-old?

2) It doesn't feel like his business is running smoothly enough to operate (more-or-less) on momentum for months at a time. Harry must know this.

It feels like this is a scene/thought process that I either missed, or one that should have been there.

Perhaps it's in the next part.

Thanks for posting a great tale.

Old-Crow

That. . . that had to be THE most frustrating chapter I've ever had to read for the character.

"as the children told their tiny savior". Except he's not anymore, is he? Marcel told him that he's now above average height for his age. So he's not tiny. He should be as tall or taller than the other children, other than Greg.