So sad. I love this.

I can't wait to read the sequel!

This is heart-wrenching, but extremely well-written.

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It is sappy but I love Lucissa so sap on. I still want to see Abraxas suffer, so I'm still waiting on that sequel. I good story overall. I would have actually wanted to see which Auror Lucius killed. Was it someone important?

I like your reference to the Lucius/Fudge story you wrote. And the interaction between Abraxas and Narcissa was great. And now Abraxas gets Narcissa to consider leaving her husband. Narcissa, choose love not duty! On to the last chapter.

I'm glad she's not leaving. I hope Draco arrives soon so they see that they can have a child.
I'm looking forward to the sequel to see what happens next :)

Oh no, Narcissa! Lucius had better get home quickly, and I hope he sees why she'll be acting in a different way. Lucius's father is causing such disruption in the family, wonder what Lucius will do when he finds out what his father has done now?

I'm glad Abraxas finally got a little bit of what he deserved, even of it wasn't much. Lucius does need to stay strong for his wife, but it's sad as little by little he becomes more of what he is in the books and movies. Very emotional, congrats :)

Oh my god, Abraxas. How could you? Definitely emotional. I love that Lucius lunged at Abraxas. He deserved it chapters and stories ago, that bastard. And i hate Brennan too. Thinks he can talk to Lucius like that. Poor Narcissa as a Lucius. More heartbreak and not even able up see their baby. It would have really hurt her to see the fetus but she didn't want it disposed of. Good chap and ready to read the next one

Why didn't Licius hex Brenan into telling him just WHERE did the git put the babys body when he 'Got rid of it' so they can TRY and get it back before its too late so they can give it a proper burial, or did Brenan get rid of the body by hitting it with a banishing spell that sent it who knows where so NOBODY will ever find it again?

Poor Narcissa and Lucius. Though I have to ask when she realized what the wetness between her legs REALLY was and also realized Lucius wasn't there to help her, instead of getting out of bed to try and somehow get to St. Mungos herself, why didn't she STAY in bed and SHRIEK for Dobby or any of the other Malfoy house elves to come help her and get THEM to call St. Mungos for her so the healers could have been on their way to the manor while Narcissa stayed in bed trying to keep herself and her baby alive with the house elves help.

I don't know about this one, Lexie. I know Lucius is hurting. Ara's death is still very fresh in his mind, but his reaction to the muggle woman seems a bit much. I love that you showed that he really contemplated it but never actually cast a spell. It shows the inner battle raging within him and makes him more human in the scene, but the initial part still feels like he's being a bit too angry with the muggle woman.

As for Narcissa losing the baby, that was gruesome. The pain and all that blood. I really felt it for Narcissa for losing the baby in such a graphic and traumatizing way. I like how you mentioned Lucius would never leave her side for anything less than a mission. And it was lucky he came when he did or he may have lost Narcissa as well.

Overall, a good story, loving the Lucius/Narcissa dynamic and I'm looking forward to more chapters.

I wonder if Narcissa cannot have girls due to Lucius's father's curse? And it's sad to see Lucius's thoughts after everything that's happened, but it's not particularly surprising when so much has been placed in his head to hate 'muggles'. Good job