Harry is becoming Hermione's slave

The story was really going well. I guess the only problem was that the effect of damaged soul on decision making saw a very rapid change. Was hoping for more. :)

Cool story, rereading it again. :)

how cute, Hermione's learning the tricks of the trade as a woman. Kiss his cheek, keep in contact with him, give him an explanation of the benefits in a simple way he can relate to, bam he is wrapped around your finger. If he doesn't listen stomp your feet cross your arms pout and threaten to withhold kisses and snuggles.

So many fucking holes in story, it's not even funny. Atrocious!

That Ginny twist I did not see that coming

I love this story. Only just found it after looking for Subversion. While that story is great, I actually like this more. It would be fantastic if you continued this, but completely understand if you don;t. Thanks for writing!

This was a really good Story.
A refreshing take on Dumbledore and Sirius and morality.
I hope You consider writing more of this.
Such good fics are hard to come by.

What a waste of a great start. After chapter 12 or 13, it just goes downhill. the writer hit a wall, then just changed the characters out of nowhere and Hermione just pulls a Daenarys and Harry does a 180 and becomes an e*mo little s. Not worth the effort to read.

fuck that, this is too late to go back, he already went back in time. this is too emo. fuck remorse. too late for that. this is too forced a situation to continue reading. there are such a thing as consistency, character consistency, and this is not it

this is getting really annoying, you're just milking a forced situation for far too long.

you know what, Hermione isn't worth it here, me thinks

I really don't like how you're forcing Hermione to not trust Harry. At this point, you'd think she would have at least a sliver of trust in Harry. Its as if you hit a wall and trying to force yaxley to be the big bad of the year and conveniently forcing Hermione to not trust Harry. this whole situation seems too forced... I hope you at least address in the next chapter.

why isn't Hermione reading everyone's mind to find out who did

I love all the twists and turns this story has! I’m glad that Dumbledore is in the know and that Hermione has put her foot back on the right path. She was scaring me for a bit. Great writing and I hope this continues! I appreciate how massive this story is and can’t imagine how much planning this takes to make something this length. Very impressive.