ooooh! i love it! this is really good... update soon please?

Alright. Going to be honest. I found this to be rather boring. The OC is a complete Mary-Sue whose creation is rather cheap 'demigod of the big three who knows everybody thing'

Interesting enough, Laufey is actually a woman in original Norse Mythology.

Can’t wait for the next update!

What’s wrong with Meda? I hope we find out soon!

She was worried about Percy dying along with them wasn’t she? Also, I would like to see how Tony deals with Loki being chained up to his niece.

Great update, can’t wait for the next one!

Update soon!

More plz

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And the best idea came from... me :-) I LOVE IT!

Just started reading this and love it! Thank you for sharing your imagination and talent! Cannot wait for the next update.

*deadpans* good job Meda... I LOVE IT!

Easy answer to Meda's question. That is, we hand him the other stones. When he asks where the final one is, we answer with "It's broken"
I LOVE IT!

OC ruined everything. sorry

*sighs as I mentally hear a wizard of oz song play in my head* well that witch is hopefully dead. I LOVE IT!

Please note: this is constructive criticism, not a flame.

Is this an intentional Mary Sue? If so, please include a note in the author's note section, which for this chapter doesn't exist for some reason. If not an intentional Mary Sue, please try to convince me of your OCs validity as a character. Starting with the super Sue-ish name and the annoying 12-year-old-on-crack-texting-her-imaginary-friends vibe I get with this chapter. It's really disjointed, unclear in explanation, and the humor is trying too hard.

I think if you try thinking of the story you are tring to tell and showing how your character sees that story unfold, it will help a lot. You don't have to try for Rick Riordan's writing style, using whatever you are most comfortable with is usually for the best. There are many improvements needed to make this a good story, but I think you can do it. Good luck.