Reviews for Break Point
FreelancerRiley chapter 6 . 5/3
A shame this was never continued, as I was very much enjoying where this was going!
Mermaid's Magic chapter 6 . 11/17/2019
Hi are you going to be adding more to this story anytime soon?

I love the pairing of Ruvik and Sebastian, yet I don't see a whole bunch of them! I wish there where more, and I really really want to read some more of this story as it's good!

Please tell me you will be adding more chapters? Please
bleedingangel95 chapter 6 . 2/6/2016
this story is fascinating and just... ugh! i cant wait for more!
Phantom Trainer chapter 6 . 11/13/2015
So, this is the first TEW fanfic i have ever read and congratulations, i'm hooked on this one. i had been watching Markiplier play through the game and i thought it was great so i went looking to see if anyone had made a fanfic for the game (turns out there's almost 200). i have to say, this is just fantastic. you really go deep and keep with how the story could go from Ruvik's POV. i hope you update soon. this is really well done!

Phantom OUT!
Hongye chapter 5 . 3/22/2015
This is an amazing piece of work. With great writing and an interesting use of psychology and messing with their minds. I applaud you. Its unusual for me to read stories using present tense but I could get used to this. Keep it up! Great work, I look forward for the next one. Take your time, dear.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/21/2015
very well written. I don't normally review so I'm not sure what else to say. I get pulled in really easily if that helps, I forget the time and suddenly the chapter is over and I'm left wishing you had written more...a lot more, like a hundred chapters would be nice. I'd probably never sleep though...
Sauv chapter 4 . 11/11/2014
This is amazing! I love how you're writing this in Ruvik's perspective! I'm reading this while remembering the events from the game, I'm guessing that barrier he couldn't control is the part where Seb's fleeing from that butcher psychopath right? Anyways, please update!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/9/2014
I'm loving how fast you update. And a having a part of the steam world Ruvik can't control, a part that is not even his? That's awesome
Guest chapter 3 . 11/8/2014
You continued. I'm so f*cking glad!
Sauv chapter 2 . 11/7/2014
Wow, this is so suspenseful, please update! Can't wait to read more!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/5/2014
Please continue. I'm very curious as to what Rukiv intends to do with each character
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
Nice. Seems a bit like a character study. I enjoyed