Reviews for On the R Train
MND chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Yo dude when you going to update!
casui chapter 3 . 12/28/2005
This story is excellent! A bit short, but the story itself is fairly good! _

-Is Lily ever going to find out who James is? It seems a good clue was left at the end of this chapter, :P.

-Sorry that this review is short bt, I a bit busy.

-HAPPY HOLIDAYS! If you celebrate

-UPDATE SOON! KEEP WRITING!

-Ja,casui
AstroLatte chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Aw! Super cute! Keep it up!
Sweet Darkling chapter 3 . 7/26/2005
I like this. It's really good! Hehe try introducing some of the rest of the gang in later chapters. That should be fun! ;-)

Thanks for reviewing my ickle story.

I think you've done your characterisation really well.

SD
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 3 . 7/11/2005
good good. but one thing, about d tree thing, dont forget, dey already knew dat in bk 5 der is a scene and in it lily and james talk. dey know each other and dey r in the 5th year. so now in the 7th year dey shudnt have just met! anywayz it is still a very very very good fic! i love it!
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 2 . 7/11/2005
oh meeting again :D:D:D:D
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
he does describe prongsie! :D and he's hot
iamjohn chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
70th Review! I'd just like to say that your fanfic is awesome and that I feel stupid to discover it so late...MORE!
Char chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I still can't believe you're not continuing this fic. You have 69 reviews with 3 chapters! THREE! I still wanna read more. C'mon you owe it to Harry Potter... James Potter... Lily?... Ha! I know... Tom Felton!

Cya.
Eh chapter 3 . 5/24/2004
I know I liek read this alreday and I'm too lazy to reread but I believe I already bugged yah enough at school and stuff to tell yh to hurry up with the next chap...so then I was like thinking that maybe, just maybe if I reveiwed you, yah know you would put a fire under it and get the next chap up soon...well I wouldn't expect it anytime soon with regents and finals coming up but yah know like the first week of summer vaca or before you leave for your trip-y thingy...Ah have fun...and update! :P
mrs.shigwa.cobain chapter 3 . 5/2/2004
I'm confused... don't you think she would recognize him, especially since she remembers him and they had dated?
someone chapter 3 . 7/26/2003
great story but u should update it past june already n july is almost over...
iambw89 chapter 1 . 7/23/2003
nice i like it...caz its short
Snapple Broken chapter 3 . 7/22/2003
Dude, More, more, more, great job btw. Your're one of the best Court here on .
Luna chapter 3 . 6/24/2003
is this gona b like the movie 'On the Line' ?

~*Luna*~
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