| Reviews for On the R Train |
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MND chapter 1 . 10/5/2007 Yo dude when you going to update! |
casui chapter 3 . 12/28/2005 This story is excellent! A bit short, but the story itself is fairly good! _ -Is Lily ever going to find out who James is? It seems a good clue was left at the end of this chapter, :P. -Sorry that this review is short bt, I a bit busy. -HAPPY HOLIDAYS! If you celebrate -UPDATE SOON! KEEP WRITING! -Ja,casui |
AstroLatte chapter 1 . 12/28/2005 Aw! Super cute! Keep it up! |
Sweet Darkling chapter 3 . 7/26/2005 I like this. It's really good! Hehe try introducing some of the rest of the gang in later chapters. That should be fun! ;-) Thanks for reviewing my ickle story. I think you've done your characterisation really well. SD |
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 3 . 7/11/2005 good good. but one thing, about d tree thing, dont forget, dey already knew dat in bk 5 der is a scene and in it lily and james talk. dey know each other and dey r in the 5th year. so now in the 7th year dey shudnt have just met! anywayz it is still a very very very good fic! i love it! |
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 2 . 7/11/2005 oh meeting again :D:D:D:D |
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 1 . 7/11/2005 he does describe prongsie! :D and he's hot |
iamjohn chapter 1 . 2/26/2005 70th Review! I'd just like to say that your fanfic is awesome and that I feel stupid to discover it so late...MORE! |
Char chapter 1 . 6/9/2004 I still can't believe you're not continuing this fic. You have 69 reviews with 3 chapters! THREE! I still wanna read more. C'mon you owe it to Harry Potter... James Potter... Lily?... Ha! I know... Tom Felton! Cya. |
Eh chapter 3 . 5/24/2004 I know I liek read this alreday and I'm too lazy to reread but I believe I already bugged yah enough at school and stuff to tell yh to hurry up with the next chap...so then I was like thinking that maybe, just maybe if I reveiwed you, yah know you would put a fire under it and get the next chap up soon...well I wouldn't expect it anytime soon with regents and finals coming up but yah know like the first week of summer vaca or before you leave for your trip-y thingy...Ah have fun...and update! :P |
mrs.shigwa.cobain chapter 3 . 5/2/2004 I'm confused... don't you think she would recognize him, especially since she remembers him and they had dated? |
someone chapter 3 . 7/26/2003 great story but u should update it past june already n july is almost over... |
iambw89 chapter 1 . 7/23/2003 nice i like it...caz its short |
Snapple Broken chapter 3 . 7/22/2003 Dude, More, more, more, great job btw. Your're one of the best Court here on . |
Luna chapter 3 . 6/24/2003 is this gona b like the movie 'On the Line' ? ~*Luna*~ |