Reviews for Bruises
purplefern chapter 1 . 8/5/2019
Oof, too real. I often wonder about how it was for Al adjusting to not being able to feel, and if he hurt anyone. I'm glad I found a fanfiction that provided. Ah, it hurts to think how feasible it is that kind gentle Al probably hurt Ed in the beginning (but like, in that sort of good way that makes me keep reading Al angst). Also I don't know why, but I loved the little detail of Ed so easily distracting Al. There's just something strongly poignant to think about that that's exactly how 11 year olds act, gifted prodigies suit of armor or otherwise. Definitely an interesting fic, I liked it a lot.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2019
I loved reading this. It was short and sweet and I love it. Keep up the good work!
LBH-don't give up chapter 1 . 9/16/2017
I love it. I absolutly love it! The story is so beautiful, so touching, so realistic. There is no way someone can resist it. I just know that through the years i will have been coming to it to read it again, to feel wonderful and be awestuck againg; to find again what i didn't even know i was craving.
Sidekicks-anonymous chapter 1 . 5/30/2017
Awww...this is beautiful. T_T
Blue Teller chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
Wow, this story is... so powerful. Amazing. :)
waddiwasiwitch chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
Wonderful!
BlueIsTheColourOfOurPlanet chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
I like this story very much, I never thought about that Al might accidentally hurt Ed because he doesn't know his own strength, I just figured he learned how to use the armour while Ed learned how to use his automail, before they went on their journey.
Fire From Above chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
Good job with that exploration of their ideas and actions.
SapphireClaw chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Wow. I never thought about how Alphonse doesn't know his strength and could accidentally hurt Ed, it's a unique idea that could very well happen in fma. And how you touched the topic of Mustang realizing that he mostly though of Ed as entertainment and not a person was great.
So all in all, an awesome lil fanfic. It's so nice to see more Parental!RoyEd around, I've almost exhausted my resources since it's basically Al I read.

Keep up the good work!