Reviews for Son of The Hearth
BlackJackkk12 chapter 11 . 5/26
Please finish this story.
Guest chapter 11 . 5/22
Please update
NormShep chapter 11 . 11/4/2019
It's a very good fic well dont let this fic die.
SIRROUGE chapter 11 . 7/31/2019
nice
atalanta chapter 11 . 7/21/2019
Please update is the best fanfiction ever
Strychnos chapter 11 . 5/22/2019
Bro this fanfic is the BOMB I mean I haven't seen any others like it, i'm already in love with it. I know that you probably won't continue it... Buuut one can only hope am I right?
Guest chapter 11 . 12/10/2018
I just love it when the author writes a good story and then stops updating completely
Ishani-SK chapter 4 . 6/10/2018
how can you catch flies under water
B Is Da Beast chapter 1 . 5/22/2018
this is such a grand story. I have never read one like this thank you for your originality. No criticism as of this moment. I loved the the pet dragon idea. It made me cry
Dashiell Reid chapter 11 . 2/13/2018
love this story cant wait for next update no criticism pretty great on your own
Roland's Blade chapter 11 . 1/29/2018
Updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate
Guest chapter 3 . 12/20/2016
INHERITANCE CYCLE!3333333
awesome!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2016
:):):) *FaNgIrL!*
DJ VILLIAN chapter 11 . 10/23/2016
This is good keep it up
HyperspaceGamer chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
The feelings between Percy and Artemis have developed WAYYY to quickly. Especially for Artemis. I mean, seriously, they haven't even known each other for more than a day or two, and that's not to mention the fact that Artemis is the biggest man-hater to ever walk this earth.
Aside from that (this is more of a personal preference, though), I hate it how Perseus bows to deities and calls them Lord "x" or Lady "x", especially to people he doesn't even respect. If I was Perseus, I wouldn't bow to anyone unless I felt that absolutely deserved it, and especially not Zeus being the pompous arrogant and paranoid ass that he is. I would walk into that throne room, purposefully disrespecting Zeus, and wait for him to try to strike me down with his Master Bolt, and simply just stand there as my blessing of Ouranos completely negated any possible damage. I'd be like "Heh. Thanks for the power up."
Anyways, I do like the story.
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