I love this if it's no trouble can you make a part two of Luffy trying to save Ace? I'm curious what would happen if he dies or if the world government finds out if Ace is The Demon and Luffy is The Angel.

this story is awesome! google brought me here though. so, I'm gonna read angelrider's ones. thank you for creating and sharing this

You know, what’s funny is that I read this first before reading Angelrider13’s story, and reading this one again without knowing it.

Woahhhhh

I loved it! Another chapter? Please? I mean, he's gotta save Ace! I can only assume his Angel identity will be revealed at Marineford (and damn imagine everyone's reactions to that!)

Omg I can't believe Luffy's crew still let him live after him telling them his reason for keeping the secret lol. Thank you so much for this wonderful story!

I enjoyed it so darn much

Really enjoyed reading this, thank you very much for sharing!

Dude this is really good and the ending was fine

hohhI wonder what would happen if Luffy came and save Ace from his execution, will he say something like "if you die the world will be unbalanced, and etc.I hope there's a sequel tho

This fic is really amazing :D
I love angelrider13's idea of luffy and ace being the angel and the demon and i'm just really happy to read another fic with this concept
I really like your characterizations and the interactions between the characters :)

Ohhhhh this was really good, you did a lovely job with this! I can easily imagine that happening, and I loved the scene with Luffy flying Nami around, it was amazing. But yeah, you did a great job of sticking to the original plot so kudos to that! If you ever decided to write more I would definitely love to read it (: thanks for writing this though!

That. Was. So. COOL! For a moment, I thought ACE was the Demon, you know? Being flames and all. Anyway, I loved this! XP

This was a really rewarding fiction story to read...after I read angelrider13's fictions. Thank you for pointing me in her direction! I've had a blast reading her One Piece fics, and now this one. :)

I felt that you explained this particular arc pretty spot on. And as an addition to angelrider13's angel and demon fictions it fits beautifully. In an area where I felt there was a bit of a plot hole if you consider what Moira was capable of. And then I read this and its not even in issue anymore! Well done! high five to you!

I sincerely hope you are doing well, may you have an excellent weekend! Thank you again x

Love it! You write beautifully! Would love to read another Ace's execution.. Pretty please? *Gives you puppy dog eyes*