What if Tsar resurrected Elsa as a spirit?

WHAT?! Please dont and it there. I loved it but please add an epiloge .

Gah! I love this story, allot! But it infuriates me how Jack is always being blamed, yeah, he caused Elsa some emotional trauma, but that doesn't mean she didn't give him his fair share, as far as I'm concerned, they both made terrible mistakes, and they are both to blame. Still love it!

HEART-BREAKINGLY AMAZING! I LOVE IT!

I liked it, I really did. I was expecting a happy ending when I started reading your story. The description is amazing. The way the plot unfolds is truly remarkable. I would've liked a happier ending for Jack, after all he's been through, I believe we all agree he deserves it.

Keep up the good work.

I pretty much followed this story from the beginning, it's probably one of the most depressing things I've ever read, but the best stories are bleak. I didn't expect it to end like it did and I'm sad it didn't, but i guess that's the point. It's been a fantastic journey, the story is insane and the details and descriptions are beautiful!

Nice...I wish there was a sequel :)

Omg please keep writing i gotta know what happens next!

I'm so sad that this is over! I've enjoyed reading it this past week, rushing through the first 25 chapters in about two days, which I really didn't have time to do with my own NaNo, but whatever. It'll be great to see you at the TGIO party tomorrow! Great story!

Poor Jack :(

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What a cliffhanger!
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Omg this chapter was beyond perfection!

Omg i love this story keep it up!