This fic does leave one in shock. What value and love of Elsa, to do this! Excellent story and what a striking plot. I congratulate you and thank you, Brooke Shinado!
I wish you all kinds of success in everything.
P.D .: Merry Christmas and a good year 2018!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

HOLY CRAP WHAT THE FUCKING HELL HAVE YOU DONE TO ME YOU BITCH? !? IF U DON'T MAKE THIS GOOD I SWEAR YOU DON'T DESERVE TO EXIST!

Wow. I don't know anymore. This made me sad. I... I don't know. Yyy.

Are you continueing The Takeover ? its been a while

Little darker than I usually enjoy, but a good story well told regardless.

Oh my poor heart... That was beautiful and haunting and good lord, Anna! Elsa! She just had to be the self-sacrificing idiot/genius. *sob* And Anna lives, which is amazing because it means Elsa's succeeded but at what cost and oh... darn, even after a night's sleep there are just no words.

Such a dark dark setting though, I wonder what they use all that sinnium for, who these bad guys are to suddenly appear out of the woodwork for the Confederation to fight (and lose against!) What are they after that they need so many miners? Who are they working for that can fund them to such a high degree that their facility is unable to be scanned, that they can afford to "care" for so many workers, guards, without being widely known?

I wonder if Anna will want to go after them?

Argh! You do well to be proud of this: am not getting this tragedy out of my head any time soon.
Here, have all of the Kudos!

Please continue this story! I love space sci fi, and it would be amazing to see where this story might go. A mix of sci fi and frozen might just be my favourite thing in the world.

And good work on the story, you had me wrapt from the beginning, and it was sad to see it end, especially in the way it did.

Thanks for the pleasure of reading this story :)

Oh fuck, it hurts everywhere why would you do this? Please dont end it here, I beg you. Please make the hurt stop.

Number of onions peeled after reading this story: A sack full.

*sniff*
Good story.

Fuuuuck, nice work tearing my heart out at the end there you monster P I guess I should've taken the angst warning seriously

I really enjoyed it though, particularly with the dynamic of Elsa being forced into the proactive, risk taking role out of concern for Anna. The hero moment at the end felt very Elsa too... Anna above all else.

Really nice work Brooke

Continue please! How will Anna react to this! please don't end it here.

Oh mon dieu wow ! THANK YOU for this amazing story (even though I don't know if I should love you or hate you right now). Elsa, you... UGH. If I were Anna I'd resuscitate her to kill her again. DAMN ELSA AND HER BEAUTIFUL UNSELFISH HEART. Seriously though, I really love what you did and I totally approve of your choice of AU haha. And I'm really impressed about how little time it took you to write this great piece of work (I'm flabbergasted, really). So, many kudos to you (and a warm hug, of course)

Dark Draconis :)

This is a great story- we all know that Elsa would do whatever it takes to protect Anna and nothing shows it more than her making the ultimate sacrifice for her. It's touching and tragic and ultimately inspiring.

I do wish that Elsa survived though.

Dammit. Why couldn't you throw us a bone and let them both live?! Gah. This is beautiful. And tragic. So tragic.
I need clarification though; Did Elsa jump in the escape pod to radio their ship or did she jump in it to distract the enemy soldiers or did she jump in it so their was less weight on the ship, allowing it to fly away quicker?
Just why did she have to die?!
Why you do this?!