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Wait... Aether, psionic... Aetherium, Psijicis it a fcking The Elder Scrolls reference? haha

huh he propably knows more history than me with these details

Really cool story so far. I really hope you continue to update it someday.

Good story keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter.

...Jesus christ, this is terrible... The info dumps, the OOC Louise, the slavery the put her in... this has not aged well at all, what were you thinking!?

Hell, where did the idea of getting to Louise world suddenly come from!? Explain you shitty author, EXPLAIN!

Or let this fic stay dead, which is probably for the best.

This story... has a lot of problems.

First of all, it'c clichie. 'Louise joins another worlds factions becomes badass.' How is that original?! Second, the info duump... good fucking god the infodumps! They happens so much it's jarring beyond belife, and they happen at the drop of a fucking hat!

The character relationships are rushed, Louise is horridly OOC, and what army in their right fucking mind accepts slaves!? Yeah real modern! Hey, if people accuse FOZ of doing, so am I. And framkly, knowing Louise, there should have been a lote more conflicts, but they are instead swep under the rug so we can get Louise becoming a badass... like every other RS...

I hope this fic stays dead, cause six feet under is the only way to keep the smell of shit under control!

Well, I was going to say you were just putting Louise into a high magitech world and ignoring her character. But then this last scene happened. Really have the saying "Needs must when the devil drives." ringing in my mind right now.

Really looking forward to how this plays out.

I won't demand a new chapter as that would be rather rude. However I will greatly encourage you to write another please.

Man this is stupid...

the tirpitz what... that was a ww2 kriegsmarine battleship the best in the german navy!

oh man... i gotta no what happens man! :P update!

Excellent story so far! I always enjoy a good reverse summoning of Louise, and this is a really interesting one. Having Louise immediately immersed in a martial society and constant combat (whether simulated or real) is definitely making her a vastly different person than she used to be. And now that the fate of Halkegenia seems to hang on the survival of Louise, she's going to be doing her damnedest to become the best in combat and survivability in order to survive. Would Karin be proud? Keep up the good work!

this is a rather pleasant reverse summon fic man this keeps on getting better and better

Well crap