i Love your story

Awesome! I am happy to see what their thoughts were. Now I remember that they did say that, duh, dumb me had a blond moment. I wish there was more of ShachixWirexHeat, or HeatxShachi, or even WirexShachi, because you don't know what their personality in One Piece, well not Heat and Wire's, but Shachi, because of his scenes in the manga and anime. Love it!

Heat and Wire said they saw Shachi at one of the meetings, what were their first thoughts, when they saw him. I would like to see what they were thinking, and when did they come up with a plan.

Will there be a MarcoAce part?

What a lovely interlude! It was so nice to read with all the angst to come I don't mind a bit of fluff and romance (1 for giving Bepo a soundproof coffin) You changed Pen and Shachi's backstory in a very cool way! I love Penguin appearing very special during their transformation. And he turned Shachi! I had feels! You nailed this one
I can't wait to see what have in store for the Hero's Arc! In the meantime, take care of yourself Aryes :3

"You could work for me" *shiveeeeeeeerrrss* Oh my! Don't you dare touch the Penguin Mingo! Killer will find you and roast you alive!
I feel like there was more action in this chapter. I especially love see Penguin fighting, because we tend to forgot he's a hell of fighter Plus he being the damsel in distress put Kilguin back in the central plot and I was afraid the Hero arc would be only about Law
Also... Penguin nullyfies powers?! How the actual heck? Give us more info! I'm so curious about that

I love this chapter! Killer got a very little scene, but meh! It's all about Penguin and YASH! My awesome boy, nom nom, please wait until Killer save you prince(ss), kkkkk

You're so amazing! You really good at this. I never read a fanfic that make me fell like i'm in the story
Keep going and I will following you till the end of the story
P/s: Sorry for my bad English

AAAAAAAHHHHHH!1!11 what have you done?! First we must wait months and now Sachi might DIE?! Please, don't let it be true! T-T don't leave us again for so long! You will continue this part right?

OMFG !
I'M SO DEAD !
THAT WAS TOO AWESOME !
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*fangirls to death*

I think that I am actually starting to ship Kilguin , all thanks to you ... :)

This is soo hot. Love it

Oh man that was incredibly hot. I wasn't really much of a fan of KidLaw. Before yeah, but when I discover LawLu, I practically ended KidLaw in my OPs because I can't see both going at it since for me, both wanted dominance. But then the threesome in this story got me thinking like 'what if you put Luffy in between them?' And baam! The picture is so beautiful. Please make it a threesome for our beloved captains. I really, really wanted to see how you would write their smut together. But anywyas, this chapter gave me the nosebleed. It was so fucking beautiful and hot I can't even stay still at my couch. Oh my god. Kudos to you author!

Great chapter Aryes! Always love to see those two bickering. AND I saw Doflamingo. At least I hope that's Doflamingo. I'm excited now. Hopefully we'll see Killer and Penguin again soon.

FAN!~