I know nothing will most likely happen with this story but I was hoping this could continue. Sorry for the inconvenience . But this is definitely a really good story

Awesome, you have got to come back and finish this.

Love this series it was beautiful in its own demonic way great use of backstory and I really liked all the plot twists anyway my favourite fan fic for now and ever please keep updating

I want to be honest, your writing isnt perfect. And one glaring issue that I saw was that I felt that you wrote Nico really out of character.
Like, I know I haven't read the book series in a while, but I know Nico doesn't act that way.
And I get that he has gone through some shit, but still.
I feel like...yeah.

Man I absolutely loved this story! I want more! U haven’t uploaded anything in forever! And ur stuff is amazing! Please upload more!

O my gosh. I love this story. It's been about 3 years since you wrote a chapter though! I'm dying to know what happens next chapter. Please, please, please, please, please write another chapter. You said that you would post one. Also STOP just STOP you criticize your writing after almost every chapter and it's not true. Your writing is amazing! Yes there is always room for improvement but nothing's perfect. By the way please tell me you didn't lose interest in this story. How could you?! I've reread certain chapters multiple times and I never get tired of it. But it's been 3 years... 3 whole years. I, along with all your other readers are dying here. I love writing cliff hangers myself but that last one was just mean. I hope this review encourages you to write and post another chapter ASAP. PRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP?!

i would like to see nico in a alternate version of this story go out witn reyna it would be intresting

OHHHH my goodness i just realized that (perhaps?) its the little boy teddy. And that Teddy couls (perhaps?) have a man-crush on Nico.
Also dont sell urself short you write well.

Is this story dead? I really hope not. I have loved every bit of this! I hope you are okay! Please update soon!

this is so amazing I always have a hard time writing fanfiction how do you do it its just so good

Apparently you haven't updated in almost a year. Is this story on hiatus? I just hope you'll update soon 'cause this is awesome! And please don't call your writing horrible, yes there's room for improvement (there is always room for improvement) but there weren't any real problems with it. If you have the inspiration, I hope you'll continue with this fic!

this a great story

WHY DO YOU LEAVE ME HANGING! I love your story!
-DarkSunshineKnight

Omg, Ok, so I recovered from my outburst last night (Sorry if I offended you, your story is just really good and it greatly messed with my feels), and now that I've fully read chapter 3, I will first complete my review from last night: First of all OH MY GOSH Nico's father escaped! :O Awesome and terrifying idea! And THE FEELS when Nico was crying silently because he thought Will didn't love him. I re-read what Will said to Percy and OH MY GOD, no wonder Nico was destroyed by this! Some of those things were really low blow though Will didn't think any of what he said. POOR NICO THOUGH! I just want to hug him, he went through such traumatic experiences and is already so damaged so young and now he feels rejected in the worst way possible! Thank you for making me suffer and enjoy every second of it. It's one of the darkest fics I've ever read. You are awesome! Concerning Percy, him pressuring Will to make a move with the threath of making Nico his was a great ( and troubling!) idea (would Percy have gone as far as raping Nico when he would show he's not willing?! I hope not and that Will is going to protect him!) And I still can't believe Nico agreed to be Reyna's boyfriend, and kissed her and touched her while Will should be the only one receiving that kind of treatment from him! Seriously, last night, I felt as if part of my soul was ripped apart! I couldn't believe it! (I still can't really), but I totally understand why you did it and it was a great idea to add even more tragic to this incredible story. As for this chapter, first, PAIN AND FEELS when Nico is throwing up and wants to stop being a burden for Will but at the same time wants to be with him and feels so bad for causing him pain and Will being helpless and desperate to help this so fragile boy he's in love with (weeps softly). There is only one thing that is, in my opinion, very unrealistic though I understand why you needed it that way for your story: A child who went through as much as Nico and that can't be alone with a man without panicking should have automatically seen a therapist years ago. And also, I don't think Sara and her husband could have spend 10 years with Nico without noticing he couldn't feed himself. And even if they did, Will should have cared enough about Nico's health to speak up, especially since he's so tiny. I think Reyna's backstory is also unrealistic, and so tragic I can't be angry at her even if she's threatening my OTP. She should have been taken away from her father and placed into a loving family, especially after her sister committed suicide! :'( But, then again, it's only my personal analysis and I mean all of this as constructive criticism. Your story is brilliant no matter what. On another note, I really like how you describe Nico's relationship with food: how he seems to both crave it and fear it and how he wants so badly to eat, but isn't able to. Heartbreaking and brilliantly described. Awesome job! Nico and Reyna's heated moment killed me. I only took small consolation in the fact he was imagining she was Will. And when Will arrives. Oh. My. Gosh. This scene, Will's actions and Will's words in Nico's ear felt at the same time like a turn on and an humiliation. And again, it felt like a really low blow to Nico. And finally, THANK YOU FOR GIVING THEM A HAPPY ENDING IN THIS CHAPTER! MY BABIES ARE FINALLY KISSING AND TOGETHER! NICO BETTER BREAK UP WITH REYNA THOUGH! Also, I think Teddy is in love with Nico and that he was the one spying on them and if that's the case, this is seriously going to be... messed up. I know you haven't updated this in forever and that you probably will never read this titanic review I spent 40 minutes writing, but Please, make Will and Nico do sweet confessions to each other and I definitely CANT WAIT for the steamy stuff to happen between them. And, on a more terrified/panicked note, PLEASE DONT MAKE NICO OR WILL BE THE ONE TO DIE! PLEASE! On an objective note, it would be an great plot twist, but I honestly don't think my heart could handle this. Thank you so much for this chapter, this story and never EVER forget what an exceptional writer you are!

NNNOOOOOOOOOO! ITS BEEN YEARS SINCE IVE BEEN THIS UPSET ABOUT A STORY! I FEEL SICK AND I WANT TO CRY! WHY, OH WHY DID WILL SAY THIS AND NICO HEARD IT! I CANT BELIEVE HE AGREED TO BE REYNA'S BOYFRIEND WHEN HE AND WILL ARE SO IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER! ITS A TERRIBLE MISUNDERSTANDING! WWWWHHHHYYYYYY?! *wails in agony* THE FUCKING FEELS! THE PAIN! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD AND PAINFUL ITS BREAKING ME! I HOPE IT GETS BETTER IN THE TWO LAST CHAPTERS BECAUSE I HAVE SCHOOL TOMORROW AND I WANT TO BE ABLE TO SLEEP! Seriously, I'm begging you, have mercy for my shattered soul!