ahhh didnt expect for Sakura to get the curse mark! i thought Choko was going to obtain it! It would've been interesting to see you describe her experience with it, a harem wouldve been cool! Considering how many people care for her, tho sadly this hasnt updated in 2 years, i hope you will one day return to this! Its hard finding an story this interesting like this one! .

Could I bother you for a small update :(

Can I be friends with you? Seriously, you know and understand how fucking awful ADHD is. I have it and dyslexia. I have hypersensitivity and almost no short term memory. The testing people refused to diagnose the dyslexia until I was 18 (we fought with them for 15 years). It’s just so nice to see/read someone else who is knowledgeable about how much this crap sucks.

I have a fast metabolism and I’m slender. Staying over 100 lbs is a huge achievement for me. I have other health issues that make eating difficult (Celia disease, migraines that make me vomit, lack of proper enzymes, over production of acid, the list goes on) so I feel for her.

Isn’t she the heiress of the huggable clan right after Choji?

you're ar really good writer!

Pretty sure Choko's (yeah, I don't know how to do the "o" or if I even can) Bingo Book entry will be needing an update once they share the story of what happened. Were it not for the fact she only punched Orochimaru in that area on two separate occasions and survived, then "Ball-buster Choko" might be a thing. Maybe the third time might be a charm? Still, "Butterfly Sniper" sounds like a great nickname Choko might earn eventually when she rises to legendary status.

I wonder how things will be with Sakura and the curse seal. She may have survived but Orochimaru wants Sasuke's body.

Hope some one helps transport the nine kits or maybe has Kakashi's nin-ken dogs summoned to help comfort the team. At least I think they might have enough time for that before any preliminary fights. For Zaku's sake, he better not be fighting any Konoha-nin since I imagine Ino would have told everyone about what he did. While I doubt Zaku would actually learn not to do such a thing ever again with anything of cultural significance, the fact remains that some people would likely want a pound of flesh from the idiot. That said, he might want to avoid Gaara and any other genin-rank jinchuuriki. Kinda makes me wonder if Orochimaru might have any feelings about the Tree of Harmony.

I miss this story so much!

Got to chapter 5 and don't like this story anymore.
I don't like how you made Choko so shy and wearing glasses. And the target of bullies. I would have much preferred Choko to be a bully to other bullies and to not need glasses. So this story is bad in my opinion.

I can't believe I hadn't read this before. Honestly this is just solid proof that no matter what fandom, the fanfic you write is always going to be 100% amazing.

As a fellow person with ADHD, Choko is honestly so damn relatable? And honestly anyone that bitched about Choko being "weak" should shut up because you know they'd also be the type of person to whine if she was "too strong".

She's fine the way she is and I really love how she's been developing throughout the plot.

I like your story, but you make your characters puke too much, that and you keep making random marriage customs out of the blue. also you've kinda been neglecting her family alot. other than that keep up the good work.

Hi, been reading all your Naruto fanfics lately (since that's the only series I watched that you have made a fanfics of) and all in all I love it! I was wondering when you're going to update the stories tho... Pls update thanks!

The thought process is annoying and the way you made the OC act was like a child with loads of insecurity a adult doesn't have like being nervous about talking to others especially child. I stooped after ch 2

Love reading this!
Can’t wait to read more!

It's really refreshing to read an SI fic where the story is more lighthearted from the beginning, and there are no plans of treason, world domination, etc. Hope it carries on like that! Looking forward to reading on.