I'm having huge problems with this fic. The logic of wiping someones memories of their loved ones out, so that they can be popular is beyond me. Like BEYOND me. Laura telling Derek they could convince Stiles to get a sex change because Derek is not gay is incredibly insensitive. Like what the fuck did I just read? The fact that Derek fucked around all his live and is a spoiled mid twenty something while Stiles is a virgin waiting for him while he decides if he wants him or not because of some meaningless flings in the past is also just very weird to me.
It was an interesting start but by now the Stiles character completely lost its appeal and appears to be a doormat. Honestly did you have to write him as a jealous person? Why give Derek ALL the fucking power. Making his mom the alpha that keeps dragging Stiles back to hear her asshole son out? This is so horribly unequal that I can't. Laura suggesting Stiles get a sex change, so that Derek would be attracted to him, was IT for me. After that I couldn't take anything serious anymore.

OMG! I love this story! Very good job! I love the idea of Scott and Malia together! Such a cute story!

Love it!

I hate to say this BUT I'm FUCKING pissed that luara! She could've totally DESTROYED Stiles life more then she already has and YET you have done nothing against her! I mean, the bitch is NOT WORTHY of being the next alpha. Magic should RIPPED that away from her yet you let it go and the bitch who has destroyed lives.

In your stories; Stiles seems to always be babysitting or mother ANOTHER WOMENS CHILD/BABY BY Derek! Kinada lame and not cool. It's like a pattern with you?

What? YOU can't do Mpreg for a Sterek? What's the POINT of them being mates if Stiles can't give Derek a baby or are you THAT homophobic!

I do get the rom-com feel but it could be a bit too angsty if she goes through with the fact I commented even once shows how much i like the story.

I agree with you on Talia, she's looking for her son, and really what kind of alpha would she be if she didnt think something was yp with that girl.

Brilliant storyline, very well written and absolute fantastic Stiles/Derek. Love all the angst and the romance. Great job!

I loved this story! It was great! I look forward to a sequel?

love love love
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Get real. No one takes a home pregnancy test as proof when things are contested. It takes a court ordered and med lab approved test for anything to be considered actual proof.

Haha a nice and cheesy ending to a wonderful story! This was a unique plot line, that was a great read! Thanks for writing - I can't wait to read more from you!

This story definitely needs a beta. There were so many typos, grammar mistakes and bad punctuation. It was quite an eye saw to read in places. A beta will only help make your stories better and more solid. So please invest in one. I can't fault your characterisation, especially with Stiles :)

Now for something that I feel strongly about in slash stories. I'm only mentioning it here because I've noticed it's a common trope in your Sterek fics... I'll be honest and say you lost me as soon as the baby plot came into play. Exactly the same with WBFE, IWE. I could deal with Leah in that story but as soon as the other baby became involved I zoned out and wasn't interested. Why because I want Sterek to be about Sterek. Why are you constantly having Derek knock up women he doesn't even love? Why are you giving him babies that aren't with his mate, and no I don't mean mpreg. I was really enjoying Sterek's burgeoning relationship until the baby gate. I was saddened when it took such a obvious turn, one you've used before.

I called Jennifer being pregnant the minute Derek broke up with her, it was very predictable and didn't shock me at all. Also making her a psycho bitch automatically meaning the baby goes to daddy, very unimaginative and if I'm honest a bit lazy. It also seems very naive to think that Stiles would just be with Derek after such a huge revelation. He's a young kid who's already unsure about his and Derek's situation, it should have been a much more difficult and drawn out decision. Stiles being responsible for a child before he's even had a chance to grow himself is not something that should be taken lightly, especially when the child's not even his. If you wanted to go the kid route why can't it be through surrogacy or adoption? And preferably when they've both been together longer than five minutes.

Hope you take these comments on board and please get that beta. The thing is you write Sterek great, but you fall back on shock value and angst. Which can be good if used properly. You can be a great writer I just think a beta and less predictable story lines would help.

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOOOODDDDnn DRAMA BOMB! AHHHH I LOVE THIS! Oh. Y god please say the baby isn't his! UGH OH MY GOD!

OH MY GOD! Ok so like yesterday I bought teen wolf season one because I've heard wonderful things about it... I watched all of season one in a night! IM OBSESSED WITH STEREK! Ugh this is the very first sterek fic I've ever read! IT'S AMAZING! The feelings! UGH I JUST WANNA SCREAM! You are so talented!