| Reviews for JUSTICE: Heroes United |
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Lloyd Max chapter 41 . 4/14/2016 Epic! I've been reading your series in chronological order and I've just finished phase one. Your DCU is awesome I wish it were your version of DCU being released in cinemas. Keep up the good work can't wait for Dark Knight 4 to be completed. |
Heart of the Demons chapter 41 . 1/25/2016 I enjoyed reading the final two chapters of "Heroes United." They were so much fun. The heroes put an end to global armageddon before it even began. This is a story that definitely leaves things open for Superman and his team to unite again in the future. |
DaLantis chapter 39 . 12/29/2015 I have enjoyed this story a lot, but I wanted to tell you, it makes the story so much better when Bruce isn't just being an Ass and is actually being himself. What I mean is, Batman started out originally as a figure very different from the dark picture we have today. I think giving him more humanity, more of an understanding demeanor is the way to go. Yeah he can be an ass and yeah he is also very defensive and mistrusting of others, but I feel he has a lot more wisdom and brains then the other members. Its what seperates him. being human yet being near god-level like the others with their supernatural or alien abilities. anyways, love this story so far and can't wait to see it continue! I hope to see Bruce become much more... real around his team. Does that make sense? Eh, whatever, I think you get my meaning, but your the writer. its your story, so either way you make his character, I'm sure it will be good. I just felt I should put in my own opinion. Batman is a trusted yet mysterious, wise yet arrogant, sad yet angry fellow, but he is also highly respected by the league and by Gordon. Sorry, off topic again :) Good story was the point in me commenting! |
Guest chapter 39 . 12/13/2015 Great story, can't wait for the next chapter |
Heart of the Demons chapter 39 . 12/5/2015 Great job on the new chapters, man. War is most definitely approaching for everybody, even Superman and his crew. With 2016 fast approaching, there's still plenty of juice in this story yet for it to survive in the new year. |
Heart of the Demons chapter 30 . 10/8/2015 I'm glad Arthur sees the danger in what Serin is accomplishing and that he managed to sway his people over to the side of right. Serin is a definite madwoman and will stop at nothing to achieve conquest of the surface world. She's gotta be stopped...and be stopped she will. (c: |
Heart of the Demons chapter 29 . 10/8/2015 Batman and Sage's conversation is my favorite thing this chapter. I do hope Sage (aka the Faceless Man) will do right by himself eventually. |
Heart of the Demons chapter 28 . 10/8/2015 Aquaman's right - the time for rivalry has passed. Everyone must stand together against the greatest threat of all. |
Heart of the Demons chapter 32 . 10/8/2015 Wonder Woman's lasso sure did its work on that guard. Now she and Flash have a better idea of what Judge Serin is up to. I pray they'll be able to stop her in time. |
Heart of the Demons chapter 31 . 10/8/2015 I'm impressed by your characterization as always, my friend. I wouldn't tick off Superman either if a lotta secrets were being kept. It was funny how Flash stumbled to find the golden Lasso Wonder Woman referred to. I kinda like Aquaman and Orm's team-up; even though they're different, they're still a family. I'm gonna read the next chapter right now. |
DC is the best chapter 27 . 9/6/2015 Your universe is amazing. I really enjoy your stories. Keep up the good work! |
Heart of the Demons chapter 27 . 8/30/2015 Key really means business. He intends to carry out his threat to change the world. I do hope the heroes will find a way to defeat him, and fast. |
Heart of the Demons chapter 26 . 8/30/2015 You do a great job of how you illustrate each character's personality, even in warfare. And thank goodness the President is safe. |
Heart of the Demons chapter 25 . 8/30/2015 Things are heating up big time. And Diana definitely needs to learn some compassion. |
Heart of the Demons chapter 24 . 8/30/2015 This chapter is as manly as it is entertaining. :) |