When are you going to update this story? Also when are you going to write the sequel for this story?

Very very badly written. Almost impossible to understand and read. Execution is very lacking, but then plot itself has promised with a lot of work.

This is definitely interesting, but reads more as a synopsis than an actual story. Dialogue and key descriptions are lacking but the basis is there! If you get the chance to rewrite it, the story would be pretty amazing!

This feels like a story out line not an actual fic, its too simple and straight forward. I don't think Harry (A male) would easily accept being female If I was suddenly in a male body I would still dress feminine and insist on using she and her when in reference to myself so why isn't it the same for Harry. I think he would cut his hair and dress as a boy if I'm honest

hiho. I think the previous reviewers are right, this story reads like a summary or story outline, not a proper story. that said, you could make it better by giving it a rewrite. elaborate some more, there are some genius ideas in there.

This is like a story outline. I think you should rewrite it.

This is one story that I really like this and really hope you decided to update it again soon because it is an amazing story so far. though I wonder how old does shopia/Harry actually look? And will Carol and the others, find them?

this is very interesting though I am curious, is Sophia stuck at the age of twelve of something or does she age and she stopped aging at the same age Harry original died at? love to read more of this either way.

really like this so is Harry/Sophia permanently around the age of thirteen fourteen or did she stop aging older/younger then that?

oh now this is a very intresting story that has me completley hooked and extremly intrested in seeing just what you are going to have happen next. I seriously would love for you to update soon so I can see. Because so far you have an utterly brilliant story.

Wow, this story is pretty ameturish. I could not get into it at all. It was basically like reading a long summary... That's it...

Very goooooooood!

Keep it coming plz it is good

I like it

It's so impersonal I feel like I just read a summary of a summary. There was little to no character interaction, just brief overviews from a certain characters point of view. Really no story development; more of a description of what is happening.
A story has dialog, settings, and plot. This has Harry going' dear diary today I decided to kill all zombies with the help of my legion of cloaked spooky minions. (Now on to the next chapter) '
This story was okay but it would be great if there was some actually character interaction that involved them talking and getting to know each other. If there was more description then the bare minimum, I know writing stuff out sometimes a is tedious but this story would be great if you added more.