| Reviews for Dismantled Pattern |
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Luthanora chapter 20 . 4/4 This is great! |
LadyDuragon chapter 1 . 3/2 Am I the only one who thinks that Noriko looks Uzumaki? Good quality of writing btw. |
kubya79 chapter 12 . 1/11 gosh darn didley darn it I HATE YUKI-SAMA |
Big Fan chapter 1 . 12/15/2019 Things happen at their own rate; plots, stories, yours, mine and hers. Take the time for yourself, be nice to yourself. |
rainbbowchick chapter 20 . 10/14/2019 I got tired of this story not making sense so I tried to skim it to see if it was going to get better and it got worse. What's the point of your OC/SI is she there to changes things, become a filler, help someone, or anything similar? Because this is just ridiculous she's mentally and physically disabled can't use charka isn't smart was locked up for 11 years and is a punching bag for the nobles and she takes it. This is worse than a Mary sue |
Big Fan chapter 1 . 10/7/2019 Hope you're doing alright. |
Eirdaru chapter 20 . 10/5/2019 I ship it. So much. I can’t wait to see her new job and stuff, I keep thinking she might be able to help with negotiations. Because trapped in a room with only studying to do for11 years. But that is probably a future job when she demonstrates these things, I also think that the prissy nobles will probably reinstate her in another stupid power play. But in that scenario I like to think she would ask bee to marry her and father her children to prevent it. That would be cool. |
Big Fan chapter 1 . 9/21/2019 come back :'( |
Ya0iLover chapter 20 . 8/11/2019 seriously? this story suck..i dont know why i waste my time reading this. what's the point of this OC anyway.. dunno how she can live like crap for the rest of her life just being a politic prison..why don't she just run away..and change her appearance so that she can live just a normal civilian life.. i bet you don't even update this because you know this story sucks so bad. |
Miyukino chapter 8 . 8/7/2019 I don't get it. What is so important about her that people want her so bad? She's disabled mentally, her father abandoned her. She got abandoned but her engagement is still up? What is her value? Just a noble? And she seems strangely okay with being tossed around between countries. Sorry, just can't get into this story. |
Yuniece Yotsuki chapter 20 . 6/30/2019 Great chapter! Hope you can update this story it is really a great story |
Ms.Creant chapter 20 . 6/12/2019 i like |
ddwig chapter 20 . 6/4/2019 Man this was a real gem to find today I hope someday you come back to writing this really enjoy it. |
deathwearsblack chapter 20 . 5/29/2019 please update when you can. |
Big Fan chapter 20 . 5/13/2019 I live in hope of your return :) |