Reviews for The Lover's Thorns
Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 12 . 5/1/2016
Awws. :3
kenni-bun bun chapter 12 . 5/1/2016
He's finally becoming a man, getting his own place and all. And shinji, I think my mind is a tad dirtier than yours.
Pretty Perverts chapter 11 . 4/8/2016
mooarrr! !
Yaksamillion chapter 11 . 3/27/2016
I want to be caught up before I placed my review. Besides a few grammatical errors - easily fixed with a second read over after your Beta has sent it back to you - and some misspellings this is actually a fantastic read. The pace and flow is not too fast making you think this is unrealistic but its not too slow making it drag on. Your placement of when to introduce characters is good. I do look forward to seeing what you do next with the Grimmjow and Ichigo dynamic since it can really go either way that this point in your story. It would also be interesting to see if Kariya makes a comeback or if he just gets what's coming to him *cough* bankruptcy *cough*. Much to think about and much to look forward to.
Sincerely -Yaks
kenni-bun bun chapter 11 . 3/23/2016
*dies from nosebleed* I'm glad they're giving it a try!
Baka Kage Usagi chapter 11 . 3/23/2016
Yea but we're your perverts! Lol great chapter Love!
Enjali chapter 11 . 3/22/2016
What I want to know is when Grimm finds out about who Ichigo's ex is and what his reaction is going to be. I know his going to find out and that we have not seen the last of that guy.
Vincent Luccion chapter 11 . 3/22/2016
I'm glad that they established something! I wasn't exactly expecting the sex part there just now, but I saw it leading in that direction with the massage. Still it's a great chapter! I did notice again with some grammar and word errors but not as many as the last chapter. If you'd like, I could beta for you.
Vincent Luccion chapter 10 . 3/21/2016
This was such a great chapter! loved it! But I do have a concern, I noticed a lot of grammar and spelling errors, I'm wondering now if you have a beta(?)
LunarNix chapter 10 . 3/21/2016
pure tears when I reached this latest chapter. I can't wait for the next update.
kenni-bun bun chapter 10 . 3/21/2016
Awwww, my teeth hurt even more because of the sweetness! I can't!
Vincent Luccion chapter 1 . 3/11/2016
I began reading this one a while ago and when I'd noticed that it hadnt been updated for a while it made me a little upset. But now that you're back to this, I just had to re-read it. and I still love it.
Hollow Ichigo-Ichigo chapter 9 . 3/7/2016
Gah poor Ichi. D: When he gunna get some Grimm? O.o
kenni-bun bun chapter 9 . 3/6/2016
Damn, grimmjow saved him again. It's actually CPR, not first aid. I would've punched his fat ass too, you literally drowned a LIFEGUARD bruh!
Vains chapter 5 . 7/4/2015
So my question is, and I do hope this isn't out of line or anything, but since you mentioned it at the beginning, how much of this is personal experience? The beginning or what I will soon read, the end? The curiosity is killing me haha, I couldn't help but ask.
As for my review, up until this chapter I have felt all the pain Ichigo has felt, all he sadness and frustration. I even planned ways in which he could get revenge from that horrible boyfriend of his. All in all I have enjoyed every emotion ridden chapter in this story. Great job
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