| Reviews for Moving On |
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Guest chapter 2 . 10/30/2014 excellent stories, Walt really can get through things with vic there...ready for more. |
Longmirefan chapter 1 . 10/30/2014 If I was Vic and Walt had asked Why? I am afraid there would have been violence. Lol. Liking forward thinking no nonsense Vic, heartbroken but willing to move on from Walt's fears and insecurities. Love this, more soon please. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2014 Omg. Don't leave us there. Fantastic start by the way. As always waiting for more |
simmonstammy7 chapter 1 . 10/29/2014 It good so far can't wait to read what happens. |
rebelxxwaltz chapter 2 . 10/31/2014 Ohhh, you totally tricked me! Great twist, and a totally realistic misunderstanding. Vic probably wouldn't expect Walt to talk to a therapist in a million years! I liked Vic's emotional transition, from anguish and irritation to understanding. As for Walt, he's reeling, and I can totally see him being too caught up in his thoughts and worries to realize the implication of Vic's statement before she kissed him. Don't worry, Vic. He'll catch up eventually. ;D Another nice story from you, thanks for posting! |
kmac9 chapter 2 . 10/30/2014 Good use of humor throughout this chapter! I can totally see Walt kicking at an invisible spot on the porch with his boots. I like that he admits to her that he didn't do a good job of grieving Martha or falling in love with his deputy. And his wonderment that she can breathe life into him at the same time she depletes his oxygen. Nicely done! |
waltxvic chapter 2 . 10/30/2014 I've never heard that saying about a cowboy's hat. I like it! Sounds exactly like what Vic would say (and do). |
susan1770 chapter 2 . 10/30/2014 That was brilliant, a totally believable solution. Should have known Walt wouldn't head for the couch but I think he will definitely get there. I so understand Vic's anguish. I would be so disappointed if Walt started seeing someone just as I was getting divorced. You wrote it beautifully, as always. I am so addicted to your short stories. :) |
Ramos chapter 2 . 10/30/2014 Ha! Yes, you had me fooled. Walt talking to someone - voluntarily? No wonder I didn't see it coming! |
tiggerdavis1970 chapter 2 . 10/30/2014 That was fantastic! Perfection! Totally what I was thinking what could happen if Vic ever misunderstood Walt! Please! I need more! |
midwestgirl10 chapter 2 . 10/30/2014 gah, Charlotte, I shoulda known!i liked the part about the cowboy hat, Walt loves that thing! |
rebelxxwaltz chapter 1 . 10/30/2014 This is a really interesting premise, a different take on how these two might behave toward each other after Vic's divorce has gone through. In a way it makes sense- without the barrier of Vic being married, there's nothing to stop the two of them from being together. That could be an extremely frightening concept, because it means that they have to face up to their feelings and I could see Walt kinda panicking because he's not sure he's ready to do that. As for Vic, the pain of seeing Walt with someone else- someone he apparently chose to date even with the full knowledge that Vic would soon be free- could definitely wear her down. Perhaps she had expectations, which I wouldn't blame her for when you consider the progression of their relationship. To have Walt continue to hold her at arm's length even once they're both free to try for something more could be devastating and I can understand why Vic would eventually make the decision to leave. More, please! I love love love me some angst, but please make them happy! ;D |
limptulip chapter 1 . 10/29/2014 Thank the gods Walt has tracked her down. Hopefully they can talk to each other and Walt will get with the picture. |
Ramos chapter 1 . 10/29/2014 It's official - Walt's an idiot. |
MissJodie chapter 1 . 10/29/2014 Ack! Nooooo, the cosmos are reeling fron the horror! |