Loved it

That was beautifully written.

I like this one as welll.

A lovely story and a lovely choice of songs.

The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Louis Armstrong's "A Kiss To Build A Dream On", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.

catspats31
Member of Eliminator

Sweet story. Thank you for sharing it.

awesome

Awww

Beautifully done as always. I love the poetry of the pieces you write inspired by song.

Swoooon :) You've done it again. So romantic and so in character. Loved this. Yet more great writing too. Thanks! :) x

wow... great job! amazing! such top ten.

I loved this so much! I was surprised by how intense it got toward the end there. Your rating threw me off, but I ain't mad at ya! Disrobing and (very discreet) references to hard-ons seem like T territory to me, but as I said before I loved it. Excellent work.

This is lovely!

This was really good. You write them so well; so believable.

Ahh the power of a kiss. Thnx.