Loved this! Good work!

Wow this was really well written. I didn't know about this headcannon before your story but now I headcannon it so hard. I'm like Jaune and I 110 percent am behind it. Funnily enough, I know a Pyrrah of my own though we only dated, never went that far. Your story actually made me feel a lot better about myself in general, I clicked on it because of the Trans thing but didn't expect for it to be so close to home. Thank you for sharing and writing. You write so well.

This was heartwarmingly sweet, you did a fantastic job :D

y'know, being able to touch something that isn't there (that Grimm had dissipated after all) would be THE perfect semblance for this version of Pyrrha...

too bad she's already got polarity.

Awesome story, and superior writing quality! I loved that you made it into so much more than sex and how you portrayed their insecurities and love for each other :)

I fapped...

Not just to the amazingly detailed scenes, but to the flawless characterizations, small banter that is seen in the shows, the unique (and not unwanted) twist to the characters and the comical and well tied up ending.

The only thing I didn't understand was the last line "To guarantee our guarantee." I may have to reread (which isn't a problem,) but overall, it felt as if you took a fist full of the RWBY universe and presented to us a splendid imagining of Pyrrha and Jaune's most intimate moment. I would love to see a second chapter of this story, where the two come together again after their surgery.

On a side note, the guy below did not succeed in pissing me off but he did upset me. Not because I'm a grammar Nazi but because of how he deliberately spelled spider that way.

All in all, I just wanted to tell you that I fap to this. 'thumps up'
-l3largus
p.s. Here's a muffin. Seriously, I'm following in case you decide to do more post-op or not!

Wuts a pox is it lik a spdr ( I just pissed all of the grammar nazis

Thats certainly an unique twist. Great story.

Well, that was an interesting one. I don't think I'll ever see Jaune and Pyrrha the same after this. And despite it feeling very weird it was still quite hot. Sooo, i don't know. Thanks for the story. It was fun to read, and thought-provoking.

Wow. That was an interesting idea. To have a Transsexual Arkos story romance is VERY difficult to pull of succesfully. And to have a smut in it too? Impossable. But, I'll be damned, you did it.

This was beautiful. And sexy

The story, all in all, was well formed. Good plot, unique twists for main characters, extremely descriptive (if you know what I mean :3) and impeccable grammar. All in all, 9/10 "Would read again" -IGN.

Wow. This story was something else entirely compared to every other JauneXPyrrha fanfic out there. The situation you put these characters in was unique although I had trouble comprehending the premise of it (it's just something I was not entirely comfortable with) but the sentiment was heart warming to say the least. My time has been well spent. Thank you.

Absolutely amazing piece of work you've written. Then God I'm not the only one with the Trans!Jaune headcanon 33