pls, update soon when you can. this story is getting more interesting like to know what happens.

Yes, please, please do not ever feel like you need to rush anything when you write. Even if it takes you two years (and counting) to think of how to present your story in its best possible form, that is much better than rushing plot, romance, and everything underneath the burning sun. A small confession to make - I actually do not watch One Piece but from the snippets I have seen and after having read so long on this site, I can usually distinguish between OOCness and ICness and you, missy, are definitely keeping the characters true to themselves. There may be moments where I wonder if Law would say certain words (but since I don't keep up with the series, I cannot comment much) but for the most part, I can tell you are very conscientious of keeping the characters IC and that is very much appreciated.

This may be a completely minor detail (to some people) but I really like how you had Nami notice the nature around them - the stars in the sky and the lights around the statues. And how Law sometimes gets caught up into it too (but only because he was busy trying to catch hints around them). I bring this up because usually in shounen shows, the characters don't really get to enjoy the view - it's just touch and go or something that moves the plot along (or author forbids, fillers).

The second part that really struck me is this world you have created. Wow. I can't even begin to guess what the colors mean or how these inhabitants came to live in this world but I find it interesting how you have set up one side to be ostensibly rich while the other side wallows in poverty - why is that? I hope I will get to find out when you come back. I also suspected the "fireflies" to be more than just a pretty sight, are they perhaps... the last people that this mysterious man have entrapped here and never escaped? Or maybe I'm just reading too much into it, ha. It is apparent that you put much thought into this and I look forward to your spontaneous return.

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More chapters !~ :p

Keep going ! Love ist! Please update!
Law is dann sexy!

Hey there! What an awesome story! I hope you can update soon. This last chapter made me smile many times, I can't wait to read more LawNa! I hope it takes some time until they find Luffy and the others. It's going to be pretty interesting to see how they survive through the days (specially the night, and let me assume the cold? Something like that, I’m a huge fan of LawNa sweet situations). It's also great the way that Law starts to pay attention to Nami, and how Nami realizes he's handsome. Obviously follow and favorite for this one!

kyaa, amazing~! keep up the awesome work~!

What? It suddenly didn't have any more chapters. D: I was very into the story, please continue. :D

Finally had a chance to read the update. So many questions and the mystery only seems to be deepening, I love it. And Law catching Nami. Just the subtlest of things, but it makes me squeal. :) Look forward to the next chapter.

i'm really glad that you updated! hahaha! i'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Aww, I did enjoy this chapter too! It's pretty tripped out, though. Were you on drugs when you wrote this? :D Kidding, kidding. But you know, if it were me I would totally welcome this as a dream off smexy Law was by my side. ;)

It is amazing~ Please finish it~ and add lots of trafalgar fluff.

i'm really interested in this fic, i hope you haven't abandon it. update soon please!

Thank god I found your history!I have been looking for a good NamixLaw with slow romance.
(I mean some historys are so fast that it scare me...)

This seems really interesting! And (le gasp) it's a One Piece story with an actual... plot! :) Kidding. But it's great to see another (great, well written) LawxNami story. There aren't enough of them. :D