It's 2020, and I gotta see what happens next. I don't want this story to end like this!

Will the second part ever come?

...3 years later, and still no second part. Don't mess with us like that.

It's funny, I really enjoy this story but everytime Labyrs and Makoto are off doing couple things I just imagine Aigis sitting at the base crying.
It's kind of bumming me out.

Cute story though.

It's so beautiful! I mean, the feels! *cries manly tears while sniffing proudly*

Keep the chapters coming matey you can't just leave it on a cliff hanger. It's rare to find good fics now and days, so i'm not leaving this one until it's done.

I miss this story :/

Makoto, you idiot.
I never even cared about P4A, but I do like Labrys in this fic.
He'd better fix things up T_T

I blame Mitsuru. You sadist empress, look at what you've done! Stop giving Makoto work to do, he saved the world goddamn it. Maybe Makoto should snap at Mitsuru instead...while equipping Thanatos. Ya' know, becomes his canon self for a while. Since I doubt canon Makoto is not scared of Mitsuru, even with her punishment.

Jk, mostly. Keep up the good work!

I'm really feeling the fluffiness! -Shulk

Jk but seriously that was cute af.

Yes, Makoto. Even if you broke your foot, you got to dance with your Robo-Waifu and kissed her.

If only a Robo-Waifu would kiss me when I broke my foot back then.

Just like the P3 MC to have a date that's all sleep.

Ah yes, the toaster. I could remember the memes about Labrys and the toaster.

By the way, this story so far has the esscence of a Shoujo manga. (It's something that I like, so don't judge me!)

The parentheses in the middle of the sentences kind of annoy me a bit though. They remind me of an author's commentary breaking the atmosphere/mood. That's just me though. Besides, it's whatever you want to do with your story. Go whatever your instincts, brain, and maybe something else tells you to.

Oh yeah, during that moment where Labrys blushes so much after Makoto saying, "Get in", Labrys should have some steam or a type of heat escaping out of her vents located at the top of her head. Then Makoto grabbs a wet towel and throws it at her face. It has a sort of emphasis on her feelings besides the blushing in my perspective.

Well, that's just my suggestion. You don't need to take it seriously or anything.

Overall, I give this chapter two headlights up!

Honestly, I like the fluff with Labrys and Makoto/Minato. This is pretty good in my opinion. I guess a Makoto and Labrys pairing would be possible if it was an AU where Makoto doesn't die in the end of Persona 3. It's a challenge for that to happen, but it's fun.

Since this fandom is supposedly about Labrys and Makoto, I highly recommend tagging Labrys and the Persona 3 main protagonist in the "Add Character" section in order to make your story more known to others.

I'm truly looking forward to this.

Another good chapter. Well done.