I loved this! I wonder where Pyrrha is now? Maybe starving in an alleyway, sobbing over her decisions.

dear writer please make more chapters

Where's the epilouge part 2?

I love these kind of story’s where pyrrahs a bitch dunno why but I just like to think that it give jaune more strength to move on from her.

Poor Ren, just join the grifball game and ignore the insanity behind u.

Imo, the last line was unfitting. This chapter ending like previous would have been better.

glad to see this updated
a nice part one for an epilogue, its the right length and shows the Jaune is moving on, I look forward to seeing part 2

I hate fanfics like these. You grabbed a kind-hearted character and twisted her into an OOC bitch to make your OTP canon.

Disgusting. You give Lancaster fans a bad reputation.

That epilogue felt more like a revenge fantasy than anything else.

That last line though, jesus fucking christ...

your right this chapter does feel like it could be written better, I think that this story could use a chapter with a Pyrrha POV.

Damn, this was heavy. I thought it would make more sense to put the flashbacks earlier in the story, but I think that would have messed with our image of Pyrrha. By keeping the flashbacks for the end, we keep an idyllic image of Pyrrha in our heads like Jaune did, which made the confrontation so much more conflicting and satisfying. If you were to continue this story, if only for one more chapter, I would really like to see a flash forward where Jaune and Ruby are really developing their relationship. Y'know, to end the series on a high note. God knows we need one after the gutpunch that was Volume 3

Please write sequel to this

SCREW WHAT THEY SAY! LANCASTER FOR LIFE!
(wheezes)
Sorry. But anyways, this story was undeniably cute and... yeah. I can't speak. This is just so excellent.

The feels man the feels