'You are the driving force in our family, do you know that? You are the force behind all of the love.' - I absolutely love that, so true, so beautiful.

Wonderfully, eloquently and beautifully written story as always. Pure joy to read. :)

Pubert is sooo adorable, I love him.

Morticia / Wednesday scene was so beautiful, I'm dead again.

OMG, all the feels in this chapter...I'm dead.

I don't really understand why Wednesday thought Morticia would disapprove of her marriage when it was always Morticia who was the most benevolent and accepting of others (yeah, I get this is the whole plot of the musical but it seems like a terrible injustice to her character).

Anyway, I adore the scene between Gomez and Wednesday, so cute.

Hahaha, omg that is one awkward dinner party. I just love how everyone squirms when Morticia's angry.

That scene where Morticia first sees Wednesday in a pink dress - it's the most eloquently written WTF moment I have ever read.

Ok, forget the comment about Wednesday being ooc who cares, this is perfect. Her internal torment is eritten so wonderfully.

And I love, love how utterly cute Pubert and Morticia are together. 3

"Prepare to read the most moving verse since Shakespeare last chewed upon his quill," - ah, Morticia, my queen of sass! Lol My favourite line in the whole chapter.

I have never seen the musical but I guess all the better for me, no spoilers. Although, Wednesday seems rather OCC (not your portrayal of course but rather the idea that she would go to such lenghts for a boy seems unlikely but hey).

Still, I love the idea where 'normal' enters Addams household. Gomez is so sweet to be so tormented over this little secret. He's precious.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
THIS IS SO GOOD I CAN'T EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS

This was wonderful. (And while I fully admit to having had a crush on Raul Julia's version of Gomez Addams since I first saw the movie forever ago, I'm sure my opinion is not at all biased.) Your style is flawless, as usual; you make it seem effortless to paint such a poignant portrait of the characters. Your writing is painstaking without being tedious, the pace is savoring without being slow, and you navigate their emotional terrain with a graceful dexterity most people (and I mean, myself) would be too impatient to try and achieve. Luckily, you write and post these stories, and we get to enjoy the fruits of your finely crafted labors. I especially like the thoughts on motherhood and marriage - so perfectly bittersweet. How you captured their habit of infusing everything with extraordinary passion. It was just so good. Thank you, thank you!

Thank you for the two chapters.

Forget my last review, THIS is the perfect ending :) love your work.

Breathtakingly beautiful ending :') Had me grinning like a Cheshire cat.

Hi there.

It kind of comes full circle with "Paris" because they still end up on a vacation/honeymoon to Paris. (Which honeymoon would it be, for them? There tenth? Thirteenth?)

I always thought that Gomez liked Paris the most because he could hear more French when they were there...

I like that Morticia knows that Gomez still finds her attractive. (Duh.) But if you think about when this story was set, when she was in her mid - forties probably, when women are often beginning to be concerned about their looks, it's kind of sweet.

But I like that he talks about other reasons why he loves Morticia, too. Because about 90% of the male population would find Morticia Addams attractive, so that in itself isn't a reason for a marriage.

Thanks for the ride.

I wasn't expecting another chapter but I'm so glad you wrote more! :) this ended the story perfectly