This is really good...!
The emotion feels so real.

Bittersweet sweet almost Heart breaking but really good!

I really Love it!
And I want to cry again too...

Wah this is so cute and very in-character I can see this happening!

Write more cute stuff like this its really good:)

Oh dear god.

Do you know how difficult is to find very well written fanfiction of TakaRitsu?
And yet... you do it flawlessly.

No, really.
To be honest, a lot of people write Takano -and even Onodera- as incredibly OoC, but you portray them perfectly.

I'm grateful.

Please, continue.
Please.

All of it, was perfect, fluff and warm.

This was so adorable x3 too cute really 3

I absolutely LOVED it!
It almost made me cry. It's really fluffy and cute. And the way how you wrote it makes me understand much more better the characters' feelings.
SO WONDERFUL

Hope to hear from you soon
TrueLove17yugi-yami