U R SO SIC DID YOU EVEN THINK OF THIS TYPE OF SHIT.

I liked the chapter.

I love this! You should read Beginning Again by TheaWrites. It's amazing just like this

I like the words and detail, I just think it is a little depressing for me. You would be a good writer, but you should also try to slow things down.

But this was such a good fan fiction and I was like this is how you end it I am sad please continue this story it is so good and I w as looking forward to the future chapters

Could u guys plz make the chapters longer much appericeated

Awww no! I loved this fanfiction it was awesome! It makes me sad that you are ditching it!

Tris and four are dumb faggots

Tris is an easy apologizing slut bag,

Make ur chapters longer u fucking slacker

I hate knives too. Dangerous. Oh and for Lauren: Twins girl and girl, Skylar and Riley out of the list Addie made but I like Erica and Ella

Amber your an amazing writer and don't let those freaking pansycakes(I called my friend a pansycake when she wouldn't try this new cookie I made because it had almonds and she doesn't like almonds and she looked at me like I had five heads XD) put you down! I love your writing keep it up and shut the bullies out! Addie love your writing too. Remeber Amber, shut the insults out and just try to ignore them, forget they are there cause girl you rock! Good job with the story, I can't wait for the next chapter(hope my little comment helped a bit Amber, these are the things my friends tell me when I get made fun of at school-mostly because I'm REALLY tall-)! Just remeber Amber, bullies are bullies, but you are yourself, and your amazing!

I love this story and the idea behind it is amazing!

This is an example of what constructive criticism should look like.
Addie, you are an amazing author, keep it up!
And Amber, please make sure you stop making Fourtris problems.
I like you both equally. KEEP IT UP LADIES!
REAR ON!-Amber

Argggg stupid cliffy