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Great work, this was an excellent way for them to start their day I think!

so i LOVE this. I LOVE ALL your stories (ive only red the nalu ones) i usually filter to favorites and i cant believe not all your stories are at the top! i fell in love with ignite and decided to go to your page and check out all your stories and in so glad i did! i love them all! they are the best. you are the best! everything is so well written and the feelings in here! i can see this story as i read it. i can FEEL this story. heck i can smell the burnt eggs! i know this one is from 5 years ago but i hope you still read these comments. please write us more Nalu. me more Nalu!

Loved it. Thanks for writing

Haha sunshine and unicorns lol. Very sexy drabble:)

For the love of Mavis, that was good.

I must have read this at least 3 different times by now its just too good. :]

You have a wonderful talent for writing.
Thus story was a good balance of beautiful and hot. ;-)

This was a fantastic one shot. Hot too! I could read it over and over again.

I am loving this one-shot of Lucy and Natsu. I don't really know much about relationship stuff in general, but this was sweet in a way. Like how Natsu was so enthralled by her and how he was still aware of her seeing as this was supposed to be their second time. So I am loving the characters, I think you've mostly kept them in character.

I am also loving your writing. This is very well written and not confusing to understand, straight forward, but it doesn't lack detail. I love how you used the prompt "sexy" with Natsu's inexperience with intimacy and how he sort of figure it all out on his own.

I hope to read more of your awesome stories and learn something along the way to improve in my own writing. Keep on writing!

Chi-Chan

Hi there, I read your fics quite a while ago actually, but I am revisiting them because they are just simply astonishing and sexy and just so well written. I actually find your words so beautiful that you inspire me to experiment with my own writing. Thanks for such awesome writing!

I just LOOOOOVE your fanfictions! (Happy mode on ;-) ) keep them coming! Can't wait for the next chapters of Ignite and To the flame!

no! don't take it down! other people are dickwads! It was rated MA- so if you can't handle it- get out, right? As always- wonderfully written!

super sweet

Very nice and descriptive story. Me like :)