This is so perfect and I loved every word! This should be on the big screen as romantic comedy, but I can't picture it without Jane and DHP in the lead roles! Bravo!

Wow, I wasn't expecting the baby to be named after Roz! I'm sure that she was shocked, but it's perfect! I am still a little leary abiut what's going on here. I don't trust Melody at all.

Thank God... She's awake. I love that she was holding the baby when she awakened.

Just when I think that this can't possibly be any more beautiful, you surprise me. Oh my... The scene at the Space Needle rivals any scene in Sleepless in Seattle, Roman Holiday, or You've Got Mail. I know there are more I could mention but I think you get the point, right? I would love to see it snow from the Space Needle observation deck. I can only imagine how cold it would be, but they have each other to keep them warm. So incredibly sweet of Roz to bring the stuffed animals and give one to Niles.

I keep saying this but this is so beautiful . I hope Daphne wakes up soon. David and the rest of the family love and miss her so.

On I love this flashback and It's so cool how some of the puzzle is starting to come together. So heartbreaking that Daphne is still in a coma, though.

Oh my, this is absolutely beautiful. I love that Niles was able to see his daughter. How wonderful it would be if Daphne were to wake up.

Oh, this is so incredibly romantic, but then I started thinking that it might be a dream and that she's really not in a coma. Sigh... I love the reference to "Midwinter Night's Dream as well.

Please say it isn't so! Daphne can't be in a coma! This is killing me! I don't know if I can stand the suspense!

Wow I had no idea that the Commodore had a soft side. I am glad that Niles gave him the check.

Oh no! This is awful! The baby and Daphne have to be ok! Please tell me that this is a dream... or a nightmare...

Love this and I love how concerned Niles is about Maris, even though they are no longer married and all that she put him through. The bit about his dissatisfaction with his drink was hilarious. I love when dramatic stories like this one can make me laugh from time to time. I can't wait for this meeting with the Commodore.

Oh wow... I should have known there would be a twist to this story! Now I'm on the edge of my seat!

Again another chapter that I can picture perfectly. I wonder why it usually rains during funerals? Of course this is Seattle but in any city the rain seems so fitting for some reason. This chapter like the others made me laugh. I love the way you've written David. Just so adorable!

That is so adorable, Niles getting into the shower with Daphne wearing his suit and not even caring. I love how sexy that sounds and you didn't need anymore details to convey that. I'm still kind of skeptical about Maris' fate though.