Natsu can be wise when he wants to.

This was delightful! I love the sensuality and innocence of it.

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL WHAT THE OOF

This was so sweet! Why haven't I read this before now?

I WILL TAKE ALL THE NATSU POVs I CAN GET

This was beautiful. It's just as I've always imagined them getting together.

It has such dept, but in a way that doesn't make Natsu seem ooc. I especially loved the part where he meant that the attraction came too fast, even though the guild claimed him to be dense. :3

Awwwww

This was so cute! Love how you portrayed the progression of their relationship.

OH MY GOD! that was really good

I love how this almost poetic and you tradition through time very skillfully, there isn't any harshness or jaggedness to your time flow. I also think you explained Natsu's feelings very well :) very well done and very romantic :)

Hey the fluff you write is just as good as the lemons. Your write flows so nicely it makes it easy for the reader to understand exactly how the characters are feeling and the reader gets lost in the story unable to stop reading till they reach the end.

This was so amazing! The writing was so beautiful and descriptive, and the way you just made the words flow together was so incredible! Your such an amazing writer, I hope you wrote more!

Nice :)

So cute,love it..

This was amazing! I love how seamlessly you wove their relationship, even if I don't think Natsu is that oblivious to the female form. It doesn't really matter, though, Bc you kept him perfectly in character for everything else. He sees the world differently (though, yeah, we sometimes want to fac-palm for it), and that comes across extremely well here.

Oh, and I can never praise this too much, but excellent grammar! Poor spelling and grammar can ruin the best of stories.