One word; wow! This story is so amazing. So sad that it ended.. :(

Hey, just wanted to say that I friggin love this story. I discovered it a while ago and read it from start to end without putting it down. Fast forward to now, and it’s probably the fourth or fifth time I’ve returned to it in the span of a few years. I’ll be honest with you, it’s hard to get me to reread a well-written book, much more so a fanfic, so I hold this fanfic in really high regards. It’s just really well written and somehow keeps pulling me back. Good job. And seriously, I LOVE this story!

LOVED IT! ;3

This was really good! The emotional Aphy link due to spark radiation exposure was really creative!

Hey, I think you should really continue to write the TFP version of Shay and the Twins! This is AWESOME!

thank you for this great story:)

All good things come to an end. I will miss Shay and her misadventures with the twins. The whole series was delightful and well looked forward to. Thank you for sharing with us.

Beautiful, beautiful story. I loved every moment of it. You write the twins so well and lovingly. I loved it. :D

Okay, you're done, I can cope...*sniffle*
Thank you for finishing this BOOK of FRIKKIN' AMAZINGNESS!
You should get paid, but instead, please just accept my sincere admiration of your writing skills. I hope they will stand you in good stead in all of your future endeavors.
Cheers,
Giddy

Oh, yes. Yessssss. Prime-verse would never be the same. (Now with more awesome!)

Splendid ending to a splendid story. I want so much for it to continue, though! I cannot get enough of these guys, and Shay brings out the best of them. Thank you so much for writing this superb and substantial fic!

Did it just suddenly switch to prime verse?

So I just wanted to thank you for writing this. I've followed it since it was only a couple of chapters old and been absolutely hooked. Shay is amazing and it's hard to remember she's an oc because of how much she just fits. Her relationship with the twins, watching it grow was thrilling and made me feel personally invested in their bond. Alas all good things must come to an end and whilst I will miss reading your work (you definitely have a way with words, especially when building up a scene) it was fun whilst it lasted.

So yeah thanks for posting this and allowing us the privilege to read this well written piece, you should definitely feel proud.

That'd actually be a pretty cool AU to see, especially if Shay had more opportunities to use that sniper gun.

That was an awesome story!