Sasuke an asshole because he seemed happy thinking he roasted Naruto alive with his jutsu, that's pretty sick, but you did mention they are on friendly terms so at least they end up getting along. Sakura focusing in her own unrequited crush to Sasuke and neglecting to bond with her own teammates is pretty sad.

I looked for this story on quotev but was unable to find it. If you ever post it somewhere again, please let us know. Thank you for writing :-)

Naruto getting trained by Madara is pretty awesome. Was Sasuke left alive in this one? Would he meet Madara? Iruka dying is pretty horrible, but I like how Naruto used Edo Tensei to beat Mizuki instead of the typical Kage Bushin. I feel bad Madara was taken from his time but pretty much everyone who matters to him is dead so it's not as bad as it would've been to leave people behind.

Readers.

My Story has been moved to Quotev and I will be there from now on. My name there is TheHeartbrokenartist or The Heart Broken Artist. The Story name is the same. Hopefully some of you read this since I have no way of logging in to my account. Anyway, have a nice day!

I'm not really one to comment, but this story has really caught my attention. I'm dying to see what happens next, and I just absolutely love LOVE seeing the two together, their contrast in looks and personalities is just such a gift. I hope they become super close family to one another, and I would just absolutely love to see Madara being protective of Naruto. And I can't wait to see how Madara will react when he finds out Naruto has the kyuubi.
Please update soon! I'll always be waiting!
Love LOVE you!

Continue Please

I actually kinda sorta maybe ship Naruto and Kazuki -

Yeah, Naruto would need to gauge himself against his peers regularly at some point if he didn't want skewed perception of himself, and he needed to socialize. I do feel bad for the man. Having to make his way in this land since he doesn't know if long he'll be stuck for, and worrying over his own world and friends/family at the same time.

a question about your fic:
it an alternate universe here?
because you never mentionned naruto being kyuubi host.
Or why nobody react about madara.
In canon universe: everyone in the world know who is madara and how he look.
sasuke and most konoha reaction shouldn't be "how an uchiha can be alive, they are supposed killed" but "how can you be always alive? your are supposed killed by hashirama almost a century ago"

well that is certainly a different take on their meeting. And automatically fixes the personality problems of the current universe's Madara.

Rangrids is right, everything they've said seems on point.
Please update! :O I'm looking forward to the next chapter very much

Why hello there!
First thing I want to say is that your story has a promise to be good, and seriously, why so few reviews? Anyway, you said that you were kind of inspired by AU Sasuke meeting canon Sasuke. I didn't read that type fics, but I think yours will turn out good, the start was promising after all.
The grammar was good, but there was lack of commas in some places, for example in dialogues where a person in addressing another one by name or nickname. About the plot, I think it's kind of original, instead of reviving someone Naruto summoned someone from AU. But you're right, you really botched up Edo Tensei, well it's funny at least. I like Madara meeting Naruto stories in general, so yeah...
So I wish you good luck with this fic and let plot bunnies hop around, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

I like it!

Hmm...Interesting.