| Reviews for The Will of Fire - PART ONE |
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   Kurosaki Yukia chapter 35 . 8/16 Oh man... this sucks...soooo bad |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 31 . 8/16 WOAAAAHHH |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 28 . 8/16 Hope he befriends Sasuke and Shikamaru and Choji and Shino |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 22 . 8/16 PHEW that is seriously a big relieve |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 21 . 8/16 Omg .. he forgot that he has to be on alert by the end... |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 19 . 8/16 Aaawww I love how Minato is PROUD all the time! Like how he was when summoned by Edo Tensei in the war |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 16 . 8/16 woah seriously tho, poor Minato so many things to think about |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 17 . 8/16 AAAAAAAWWWWW cute baby Naruto with his daddyyyyy MY HEARTTT SO MUCH FEELSSS |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 15 . 8/16 WOOOOHHH WAY TO GO MINATO |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 14 . 8/16 I just LOVE it whenever Minato calls Kakashi his son |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 11 . 8/16 OMG YESSS I alwyas love the idea of Kakahsi being Naruto's big brother! Oh and Minato regarding Kakashi as his son is just FEELSSSSS |
| Vishesh chapter 53 . 4/25 the chapters are too short, you could make bigger chapters in the future, that are ATLEAST four times the current length |
| Vishesh chapter 39 . 4/25 about the one line AU here at the end... its ciao, not chao. get that right. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/21 Who the hello is el |
| BoaresJJA chapter 39 . 12/22/2019 I'm kind of confused at the fact that the Ninja Academy starts at 8, you said it's 5. Also it wouldn't be difficult to imagine Kushina doing a bit of light Chakra control/training excercises with Naruto to keep busy and teach Naruto a bit. After getting kidnapped the first time wouldn't first instinct be to... Train him so he can (hopefully) escape from a situation like that again if it were to occur once more? Or is that too logical? Atleast teaching Naruto Kawarimi or Henge. |
